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    "Transparent" by A2Z, CarsonJet, RJay and MiC Check

    Yo, this is a collab long in the making with lots of feeling behind it

    "TRANSPARENT"
    Lyrcis by: A2Z, Mic Check, CarsonJet, RJay
    Beat: "Good Times" by Styles P

    [A2Z]
    My hearts a window, you can look into my soul//
    See the vision of my dad leaving, see the gaping hole//
    See the way he looked right before he said good bye//
    Like we were a minor trouble and it would be better if we die//
    See the jumpings in the streets, the ripped jeans and busted dreams//
    The neighborhood gangs shooting Gs cuz of diffferent color schemes//
    The drive bys, the knife fights...late at night the screams//
    People shot laying on the ground, blood coming out in scarlet streams//
    The drug deals, the beefs, and we're not talking about Mickey Ds//
    The mafia, the money owed and the compensation of broken knees//
    The projects, the homeless, the rich above the poor//
    The polticians saying they can fix poverty, but not telling us the cure//
    The broken down homes, the broken down schools//
    The dealers at home room, flossing fancy jewels//
    The women not respecting themselves, giving niggas head for cash//
    They need money for tuition, plus Baby Jamaals got diaper rash//
    The students not caring, they aint going no where fast//
    Gonna die poor and lonely, good for nothing but sitting on their ass//
    Something gotta change my friends, life cant be just this//
    I know ghetto children got it in them, we got to change it//

    [hook]
    [A2Z]Look into my being, i bear myself to you//
    [RJay]Like Jesus giving himself up, I sacrifice for you//
    [Carson Je]tYou speak what you feel, feel what you speak Ill do the same for you//
    [MiC Check]Your like water why bother i see through you//
    [A2Z echoes]Look into my being I bear myself to you//

    [RJay]
    man you im a lock down the truth but i got a lil that confuses me n it confuse you//
    understand but damn who could be the man im a lock it for ya let you understand//
    damn i thought we was cool shit we was always down//
    partner we ran the hood what the hell is goin down//
    nigga i see you there y you always got a frown//
    he aint like me now cause now im pimpn wearn the crown//
    but you i saw through you man why you tryna front//
    it wasnt about me but you went in fuck things up/
    /i see what you sayn under ya breath call me a cunt//
    and know you gonna turn bitch n you calln me punk//
    aint like this why your shoulder so cold//talkn ta you is like payn a toll//
    its not my fault im sorry//im wearn guci why you wear faded glory//
    im a let this shit soon mold//i know you dawg i can see through soul/
    /we was cool now i aint carin//
    we are no longer cool you are now transparent

    [hook]
    [A2Z]Look into my being, i bear myself to you//
    [RJay]Like Jesus giving himself up, I sacrifice for you//
    [Carson Je]tYou speak what you feel, feel what you speak Ill do the same for you//
    [MiC Check]Your like water why bother i see through you//
    [A2Z echoes]Look into my being I bear myself to you//


    [CarsonJet]
    yo jesus dont flwo up in these rafter's seekin deep within my anatomy//
    Seekin lyrical hustlers by da bus-load, can-re-think up-ne matter..tearin lyric's up quite un-scavengly//
    voices creep hintin evil sin from my dyslexic past writtin inmy mind up backwards//
    septars of ancient deity's not historical enuff to re-create my mind within ther latin words//
    stigmatic scriptures racin thru my soul..jus pasin thru deeps translucent worlds..givin birth : satanic foal//
    re-born unseen nature...un-told to the world wich we call home...the deep mind-of-de-unkown continues in my dome//
    re-searchin mind transparency's of others...floin in my brain like intangible vaulues of numbers//
    mathematical equations writtin out in intense dialect..makin sense of these values mean-less to my till i creep to a slumber//
    Dreams-nightmares...like freddy my soul awakens makin sense of it all//
    satanic culture in the hearse of the heart filled night fathomed by a lyrical call to press violent charges on all//
    Da mind on Cj u have entered-survived ...consider ur-self deprived to not remain in my symattical state-of-mind//
    thin line tween geniuosity an insanity, i tight rope dis every day hopin tha latter side i will neva find//....

    [hook]
    [A2Z]Look into my being, i bear myself to you//
    [RJay]Like Jesus giving himself up, I sacrifice for you//
    [Carson Je]tYou speak what you feel, feel what you speak Ill do the same for you//
    [MiC Check]Your like water why bother i see through you//
    [A2Z echoes]Look into my being I bear myself to you//

    [MiC Check]
    An eternal life blessing; listen to HipHop as I escape from this infernal strife stressing //
    There’s no testing; the greatest art form that keeps my heart warm; never catch my mic resting //
    I start reckon; why Graffiti artists get locked up for reppin without a lethal weapon //
    It’s a form of expression without the use of aggression; cops should learn this lesson //
    Don’t be fooled; reminisce the old school; I thought I told you; females rep this, just as cold too //
    We roll through like shopping carts; HipHop music is topping charts; this is for all you readers //
    Head-spins arouse up-roar from the bleachers; we’re just the seekers; enough props to founders and teachers //
    Preachers preach to reach; an art form that involves its own speech; we vibe when we hear a record screech //
    DJ’s drop ‘break beats’ like ‘shattered instrumentals’; gather credentials; four type’s of elemental essentials //
    The fundamental of rhyming got me writing to fund my mental; each differential in its form n still growth potential //
    From a poor residential grew up under HipHops influential fables; rocking flip-flops; ladies dip-dop; kids on their feet like hopscotch when I spin turntables //
    In-fact this art enables me to turn tables into DJ sets as firm cables plug in; crowd jumpin with a ghetto wardrobe thuggin //
    Sipping on sumethin; crowds fit in to watch DJ’s spin in beats bumping and get MC’s to spit something //
    I paint a picture; picture faders and a mixer; mix records together like an elixir fixer; in battles I scratch much quicker //
    Attach a bunch of stickers to my techniques; heads seek the music that my deck speaks //
    Even def geeks bobbin their head to the realness; check the vibe…I know you feel this //
    I’m the DJ running the crowd with my music; while MC’s grab the mic and abuse it //
    Don’t get it confused kid; breaking originated as self-defense so watch how u use it //
    I’m on a Rhythm and Blues tip; incorporated reggae vibes to watch ladies move hips //
    What I do is; crucial to the art form; providing the beats while artists perform; crowds spin towels as if I start storms //
    A smart norm leading crowds, I’m a rebel in place; scratching and tuning while equalizers fade in the treble and base //
    I’ve got another tune ready to lace; as I rock steady the place; needles ‘scratch records’ like a ‘new set time in a race’ //
    Don’t go blind by the phase; kids rhyming in ways to get deals as I make artists ‘blow up’ like I was ‘mining’ the place //
    Catch Techniques spinning great beats; MC’s spitting more knowledge then the late Greeks //
    Where else can u find scraped cheeks on break freaks who spin on cardboard for strait weeks //
    Bent up physiques; up-rock to windmills; kids gather around in circles to see skills //
    Receive thrills in break tournaments hoping to win so I can pay these bills //
    For my crew I led wins with perfect head-spins; busted hand-glides to beats from the east to west side //
    The best tried to make heads collide in lyrical wars; kids forgot that I digest pride and spit empirical metaphors //

    [Hook]
    [A2Z]Look into my being, i bear myself to you//
    [RJay]Like Jesus giving himself up, I sacrifice for you//
    [Carson Je]tYou speak what you feel, feel what you speak Ill do the same for you//
    [MiC Check]Your like water why bother i see through you//
    [A2Z echoes]Look into my being I bear myself to you//


    [Talking
    MiC Check: So there you have it
    CarsonJet: Not you see me
    A2Z: But let me ask you this…

    [Pause]

    RJay: Will you ever know me?
    Last edited by A2Z; June 2nd, 2003 at 11:33 PM
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    God Damn.... This was a hott collab.. the only person I've heard of is Mic Check... wasn't he banned for bitting?

    well on a serious note:
    CarsonJet and RJay.... wasn't feelin' thier verses too much. No doubt they were nice but just wasn't vibin' to what they had to say.... and Carson seemed to try to push the Vocab a little too much... be easy in trying to sound super intelligent and just keep shit simple but with meaning like A2Z did.... Mic Check had an ill verse and A2Z's Verse was hott as well..... this was a Dope collab and I hope it doesn't get slept on........

    Return the favor and Check out my collab with BASH and the one with WORD PERFECT
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    thanx a lot brah....uppin for more info
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    Mic Check and CarsonJet tore this shit up...........They had multies , wordplay , vocab. But carsonjet seemed to force tha vocabulary in some parts.............A2Z had an Ill verse , i liked his wordplay , Rjay had an aight verse , Could have been better.........The Hook was Nice , I liked tha concept.......I didnt read Mic check's whole verse.......I read a half of it...And it was Ill.......Overall u cats get a 9/10.......Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=52756
    Last edited by Bashire; June 3rd, 2003 at 12:20 AM

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    MiC ChEcK
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    thanx yo ^^

    uppin for more replys............................................ ..............

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    this was a hot ass collab nice job peeps keep up tha good work mad hot lol .................................................. .................................

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    up up uppin for feedback
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    come on yall, we need feedback
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    uppin goddamit, ill return the favor on any open mic
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    really feelin mic check and a2z the other two need alot of work no offense but overrall a 6.5/10 r jay and carson jet kind of dragged this collabo down

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    thanx playa...up up uppin
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    can you say whoa? lemme do it 4 u. WHOA! shits sick. hottest collabo i seen in a hot minute.

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    ok...i take it ya like it...next question....legend material?
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    answer. no but i will say this. its still hot as fuck.

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    thanx, like i said, drop the link with some feedback for this and i will reurn the favor
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