Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
Rebuttal Option
both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)
You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle
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@Lenox
@Soule
@Soule rebuttal or reg?
I'll smash this bitch, one hit and your cheeks would clench, retreating.
knock the wind outta ya so hard you'd think Dia bumped you trick r treating.
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Originally Posted by Wuxia
It’s 2023 bro, that rap clique shit is actually a gimmick,
The good guys LOL.. how are you the sole founder and also the only wack faggot in it?
Last edited by Lenox; November 1st, 2023 at 01:55 AM
im going with lenox.
soule it comes across statementish. ill be honest, the cheeks clench / hit this bitch has a gay connotation. wasnt a fan this week, im sorry to say
Lenox yours was decent. a simple nameplay but you attacked your opponents and it hit pretty well imo.
v/ lenox
It can be argued that Soule's bar was a little statementish and I wouldn't disagree with that. But I also wouldn't pass on it because of that, because I thought that within that statementish bar there was a great setup that worked in making the punchline that much funnier to me. I actually enjoyed it. The problem Soule dealt with in this battle, imo, wasn't the quality of his bar, but more so the quality of Lenox bar. His punch was fire. It was a dope personal. And it hit with impact that was smooth and enjoyable to read.
v-Lenox
^i think ur throwing the word ‘fire’ around a little to freely… lenox punch was alright.. but fire? Come on (no hate lenox) but that crazy to say… punch was cool at best..I thought souls bar could of been turned into something better but it wasn’t so it.. came off blah… nothing to it..VOTE LENOX for the better hit
Soules bar was confusing to me like there was supposed to be a slick word play for dia’s penis or something and there was t. Lennox punch was humouous and would’ve been decent audio wise, text wise was a bit simple but gave me a slightly harder breath out my nose than usual so I enjoyed it.
V/lennox
Breath out my nose made me laugh … vote slayerrrOriginally Posted by Slayerr.
I didn’t like the cheeks would clench lol to me that read funny… sounds redundant but yeah came off a little statementish … Lennox had a cool personal / name flip … so he gets my vote here … good battle
Vote Len
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5-0 Lenox wins.
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Originally Posted by Wuxia
5-0 Lenox wins
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