Last season of 1-2 chat

[Slayerr.]

lmao word, I was listening to that shit just the other day lmao

If you’re missing me slide into my dms bro don’t listen to music and cry

For real though got a link?

[Wordz AhGod.]

If you’re missing me slide into my dms bro don’t listen to music and cry

For real though got a link?

but of course my guy lmao https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=9295651

[Slayerr.]

Hahahaha creased up at you calling a 14 year old white kid the n word

[Wordz AhGod.]

lmao tbh now that I listen to it again the verse was trash but shit was mad old haha.

[Slayerr.]

It was trash other than the work of art/draw attention line but in your defence it didn’t need to be good to get the job done

[Wordz AhGod.]

I never did audio battles before so I just wrote some shit I thought sounded dope at the time and shipped it lmao.

[Barcotic]

Good shit @Blue Bayou
Salamander ghostwrote for me

[Unfukwitable]

I forgot to post smh

[Wordz AhGod.]

I swear you would be dope af if you would just remember to show dude lol.

[Pharaohs Army]

@Wordz AhGod
Thanks v. much for your vote and feed & participation.

That said, regarding your critique I just want to make a quick note in my "defense"...don't worry; not quite a sway:

Playing off my opponent's bar?
I believe the only 3 words related to his were "he posted early".
Simply a comment that I posted late at night way after him...for a rhyme fit.
If you really think that's playing off his punch man, that seems kinda harsh to me.
It was a nameplay punch using the band's debut album for a quick brag. Relating to his name and my birth-year, NOT playing on his punch. That's my point.

I'm not contesting the vote at all, just explaining a bit.

GL next wk

[Wordz AhGod.]

Swaying but exhibit A) talking about him posting early and exhibit B) he talked about you flying high which you repeated and replied to. Would be very odd if you said that was a coincidence bruh.

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I don’t think it’s worth the trouble of a DQ, we don’t even have enough activity here to care to enforce rules so I wouldn’t trip. Do whatever makes you happy dude.

[Pharaohs Army]

Swaying but exhibit A) talking about him posting early and exhibit B) he talked about you flying high which you repeated and replied to. Would be very odd if you said that was a coincidence bruh.

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I don’t think it’s worth the trouble of a DQ, we don’t even have enough activity here to care to enforce rules so I wouldn’t trip. Do whatever makes you happy dude.

Wow, Wordz. I did not even know about the "fly' play. Lol.
I truly thought my only pre-play was the "he posted early".

"Fly" was simply a near/inner for "reaLize"....and is the quickest 3 letter word to brag on oneself.
I DID NOT EVEN PURPOSEFULLY PLAY ON HIS FLY HIGH LOL
But you know what, Wordz. I like it even better now that it appears to be a play.-- So yes that does make me happy.

I have no problem docking me a bit for it...

That said, (all) [not talking to just words here]
What exactly does it take for a W here?

Obviously stretched longbar uber-rhymes with simple audio disses - NO
Obviously all the other bullshit I've/others have tried to pull - NO
BUT...This week I just did a nice nameplay/band&album play with a self-brag and opening homo diss.

***cencored sway asking about my opponent's closing Simile***
Is it amazing? Should I "get" it? Is that why he won?

Just musing some open questions?
Wouldn't you if nothing was working? - I had a good punch this week I believe. That's one belief tho.

What'dya WANT?/ I'm versatile.
Lol.~

[Wordz AhGod.]

That’s a good question and I think it comes down to knowing your audience. There’s a specific style that every site tends to follow individually that will generally get you at least consistency. Most of my wins don’t come from me writing overall better shit but rather from consistency. Say you have 8 mehh lines with one amazing line but the other guy has 10 ok lines, he’ll probably take the W even without line of the battle. Text is also very different from writing a song, doing audio, or a live battle. Live battle is usually more of a long bar or shit with no fixed rhythm which doesn’t translate well in RB and NC battles. There are some forums that loved it floating around but this ain’t it. The knowing your crowd part comes into play when you know who’s voting. If I have a lot of NC dudes voting, my style of writing will usually be shorter bars with grimy sounding wording. They’re corny so they like when dudes talk like gangsters. RBs general style to me from my point of view is a bit more playful or less focused on shit like gun bars. This has kind of mixed up over the years and we’ve always jumped into each others sites. Quickest way I think for you to improve is to pick a dope battler or a few that you like or see that is successful and study how they write. Personally I think people like J Hens, Tettris, Orc and Bar (when he’s not being emotional) are great examples as they’re pretty consistent no matter where they go.

[Slayerr.]

I would like to apologise to anyone who took the time to read my punch this week, I was in bed after a heavy night at the pub, half asleep fingering the remains of my kebab when I remembered I had to drop something. At least auto correct made me seem coherent

[Wordz AhGod.]

You good bro.. nobody expected anything from you to begin with.