Throw it back , Fuck if its whack

[BeLoved Warlock]

I throw it back in reverse
Thought I'd drop a line & share a verse.
Many words I use to curse
They try to hit me where it hurts.
But my pain was here before the Blow.
Feelings I hope you never know.
They do it all for show
When my times up I'm ready to go.
Til that day I'm here to flow
With Rhythm & Love can you hear it tho?
Aim High towards Heavens skies
Still ask the Lord Just Who am I?
Inside this mind I still reside.
Have fun while your on this ride.
Dont let hate take away your pride.
Even just beginning I hit my stride
Right now is the turning of the tide
No need to keep heat by my side.

[Celph Taut]

A little simplistic for my taste. But with practice and better structure, I can see you fleshing out something with more substance. This seems to be all over the place.

[Lady Poet]

I'm not feeling it
It would have been better if you switch it up
it helps it flow better
Practice makes prefect

[BeLoved Warlock]

Yeah this was a quickie at work I am just trying to get back into it , hate it or love it I'm glad u took the time to put eyes on it and dropping a line