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    LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Letterman vs Miracle LET WINS

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Letterman vs Miracle

    Ok.

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Letterman vs Miracle

    Check

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Letterman vs Miracle

    @Letterman due tomorrow
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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Letterman vs Miracle

    Requesting the ext early, just in case.

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Letterman vs Miracle

    Vs @Letterman

    We go back a long time.. N it saddens me to leave you fried, geek
    I might start feeling like im Blue after this, s'cuz facing you is like a bye week
    mir will shatter ya jaw w/a roundhouse.. Your whole face I'll smash in
    bring a kick to letching so vicious i'll get locked up for sexual harassment
    Ill leave ya body in a laker swamp somewhere..  Bullet riddled by sunlight
    When that chopper lift, it'll spark fire n have u hitting the ground like a kobe flight
    Talk all the shit that u want. My nine taking you down like trips to the south
    And when i raise this armature face, it will instantly quiet this motor mouth
    Girls don't enjoy sex w/ u! He AINT making them orgasm any time
    If you hear ammonia probably waking them up w/smelling salts after a sex crime
    w/ my bare fist i will break you. DONT RUN.....be a man and face it..
    Ill beat him so bad paramedics will have to get help from tiffany & co. to bracelet
    Last edited by miracle; January 29th, 2020 at 03:08 PM

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Letterman vs Miracle

    My style is full of violence. & You can trust, it’s not civil
    So after this you’ll actually have to admit.. yourself into a fuckin hospital
    For your own safety.. Sit there, dont speak out of turn & just listen
    Or your fam will be checking a box, if you don’t follow the terms and conditions
    U been prolonging death. I got bullets to make u die this hour
    & it’ll be exponential.. once I put 2 at your top, & send you to a higher power
    I tried to get him a chick. He had a loss of words & approached wit doubt
    But even after telling Miralax, his bitch ass still couldn’t seem to get that shit out
    Ur not champ material yet. This fool needs some help
    But keep trying to conveyor skills, it only proves to us you cant make moves w/ da belt
    Ur girl don’t fuck with u no more.. but when she gave me head she was all joyful
    To the point that I had to halter top, while you can’t the bitch to take that off for you

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Letterman vs Miracle

    We go back a long time.. N it saddens me to leave you fried, geek
    I might start feeling like im Blue after this, s'cuz facing you is like a bye week
    cool hit
    mir will shatter ya jaw w/a roundhouse.. Your whole face I'll smash in
    bring a kick to letching so vicious i'll get locked up for sexual harassment
    your whole face I'll smash in comes across weird. Should have spelt it letchin' not let ching
    Too much fuckery here for me to count this bar

    Ill leave ya body in a laker swamp somewhere.. Bullet riddled by sunlight
    When that chopper lift, it'll spark fire n have u hitting the ground like a kobe flight
    dont like this
    Talk all the shit that u want. My nine taking you down like trips to the south
    And when i raise this armature face, it will instantly quiet this motor mouth
    cool
    Girls don't enjoy sex w/ u! He AINT making them orgasm any time
    If you hear ammonia probably waking them up w/smelling salts after a sex crime
    cool
    w/ my bare fist i will break you. DONT RUN.....be a man and face it..
    Ill beat him so bad paramedics will have to get help from tiffany & co. to bracelet
    didnt like the wp was executed. Also again with the Yoda wording... with my bare fist I will break you..

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    My style is full of violence. & You can trust, it’s not civil
    So after this you’ll actually have to admit.. yourself into a fuckin hospital
    I just did a admission / hospital bar and mine was better not digging this
    For your own safety.. Sit there, dont speak out of turn & just listen
    Or your fam will be checking a box, if you don’t follow the terms and conditions
    this is decent
    U been prolonging death. I got bullets to make u die this hour
    & it’ll be exponential.. once I put 2 at your top, & send you to a higher power
    this is cool
    I tried to get him a chick. He had a loss of words & approached wit doubt
    But even after telling Miralax, his bitch ass still couldn’t seem to get that shit out
    its ok
    Ur not champ material yet. This fool needs some help
    But keep trying to conveyor skills, it only proves to us you cant make moves w/ da belt
    conveyor is a reach. Ending sounds lik er not your
    Ur girl don’t fuck with u no more.. but when she gave me head she was all joyful
    To the point that I had to halter top, while you can’t the bitch to take that off for you
    dont like this

    Letterman had lots with higher power but mir came more consistent.

    v/mir

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Letterman vs Miracle

    Miracle

    We go back a long time.. N it saddens me to leave you fried, geek
    I might start feeling like im Blue after this, s'cuz facing you is like a bye week
    You rarely see me call shit played, cuz everything played to some degree... but as far as a NP on Blue, I have seen 'feelin blue' a ton. This aight
    mir will shatter ya jaw w/a roundhouse.. Your whole face I'll smash in
    bring a kick to letching so vicious i'll get locked up for sexual harassment
    I like the concept but not where you went with it.
    Ill leave ya body in a laker swamp somewhere.. Bullet riddled by sunlight
    When that chopper lift, it'll spark fire n have u hitting the ground like a kobe flight
    DQ
    Talk all the shit that u want. My nine taking you down like trips to the south
    And when i raise this armature face, it will instantly quiet this motor mouth
    WP is fire. One of the better gun bars
    Girls don't enjoy sex w/ u! He AINT making them orgasm any time
    If you hear ammonia probably waking them up w/smelling salts after a sex crime
    I'd use "get ammonia" or "hear a moan ya". A bit wordy, but solid overall
    w/ my bare fist i will break you. DONT RUN.....be a man and face it..
    Ill beat him so bad paramedics will have to get help from tiffany & co. to bracelet
    Good

    You finished strong. Your concepts and wording are both generally good. Not much to improve in that area except tightening up the little things. Like taking out unnecessary words to make it flow that much smoother. The closer for example:

    "I'll beat him so bad paramedics'll need tiffany & co to bracelet"

    A simple change like that makes it flow smoother, while getting the same point across. Rewording the whole bar & using more jewelry wp throughout woulda made it fire.

    Good verse overall though, not a single bad bar.

    7.5/10


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    Letterman

    My style is full of violence. & You can trust, it’s not civil
    So after this you’ll actually have to admit.. yourself into a fuckin hospital
    So-So misdirection
    For your own safety.. Sit there, dont speak out of turn & just listen
    Or your fam will be checking a box, if you don’t follow the terms and conditions
    Fresh flip/concept on t&c
    U been prolonging death. I got bullets to make u die this hour
    & it’ll be exponential.. once I put 2 at your top, & send you to a higher power
    One of the more creative gun bars I've seen, but I'm not liking how basic the word exponential was tied into the punch.
    I tried to get him a chick. He had a loss of words & approached wit doubt
    But even after telling Miralax, his bitch ass still couldn’t seem to get that shit out
    Nice
    Ur not champ material yet. This fool needs some help
    But keep trying to conveyor skills, it only proves to us you cant make moves w/ da belt
    Nice again
    Ur girl don’t fuck with u no more.. but when she gave me head she was all joyful
    To the point that I had to halter top, while you can’t the bitch to take that off for you
    Not as good as the last three, but better than the first two

    Good verse. Conveyor should've been the closer. You've got wording and flow down. Your last three bars were better at belittling the opponent directly and creatively, but I wouldn't consider the others bad.

    Both verses were surprisingly consistent, but Letterman had stronger standouts.

    8.5/10

    Vote Letterman
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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Letterman vs Miracle OPEN 4 VOTES

    Will hit this as lunch....cool battle dudes
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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Letterman vs Miracle OPEN 4 VOTES

    We go back a long time.. N it saddens me to leave you fried, geek
    I might start feeling like im Blue after this, s'cuz facing you is like a bye week
    Good start.

    mir will shatter ya jaw w/a roundhouse.. Your whole face I'll smash in
    bring a kick to letching so vicious i'll get locked up for sexual harassment
    Pretty good… You may want to let people know Letching is a word…


    Ill leave ya body in a laker swamp somewhere..  Bullet riddled by sunlight
    When that chopper lift, it'll spark fire n have u hitting the ground like a kobe flight
    Nope. Not giving anyone credit for using Kobe this week.

    Talk all the shit that u want. My nine taking you down like trips to the south
    And when i raise this armature face, it will instantly quiet this motor mouth
    Nice.


    Girls don't enjoy sex w/ u! He AINT making them orgasm any time
    If you hear ammonia probably waking them up w/smelling salts after a sex crime
    Fair.

    w/ my bare fist i will break you. DONT RUN.....be a man and face it..
    Ill beat him so bad paramedics will have to get help from tiffany & co. to bracelet
    This read funny… good idea - I’ve never seen a bracelet let wp just chunky.


    My style is full of violence. & You can trust, it’s not civil
    So after this you’ll actually have to admit.. yourself into a fuckin hospital
    Fresh start.

    For your own safety.. Sit there, dont speak out of turn & just listen
    Or your fam will be checking a box, if you don’t follow the terms and conditions
    Haha nice.

    U been prolonging death. I got bullets to make u die this hour
    & it’ll be exponential.. once I put 2 at your top, & send you to a higher power
    cool.

    I tried to get him a chick. He had a loss of words & approached wit doubt
    But even after telling Miralax, his bitch ass still couldn’t seem to get that shit out
    hahaa… nice.

    Ur not champ material yet. This fool needs some help
    But keep trying to conveyor skills, it only proves to us you cant make moves w/ da belt
    Ok.

    Ur girl don’t fuck with u no more.. but when she gave me head she was all joyful
    To the point that I had to halter top, while you can’t the bitch to take that off for you
    Ok.

    This was a really good battle.. and super close. I am going with Letterman for a couple of reasons
    His misses were more enjoyable… and Mir’s wording was weird sometimes? The bracelet bar would’ve
    Been done right and I go with him… but it wasn’t sooo

    v/Let.

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Letterman vs Miracle OPEN 4 VOTES

    2-1 letter

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Letterman vs Miracle OPEN 4 VOTES

    We go back a long time.. N it saddens me to leave you fried, geek
    I might start feeling like im Blue after this, s'cuz facing you is like a bye week
    ^ehh basic. not a miss just basic
    mir will shatter ya jaw w/a roundhouse.. Your whole face I'll smash in
    bring a kick to letching so vicious i'll get locked up for sexual harassment
    ^had potential but didn't like the wording. why would u get locked up for sexual harassment when u kick someone?
    Ill leave ya body in a laker swamp somewhere.. Bullet riddled by sunlight
    When that chopper lift, it'll spark fire n have u hitting the ground like a kobe flight
    ^lol
    Talk all the shit that u want. My nine taking you down like trips to the south
    And when i raise this armature face, it will instantly quiet this motor mouth
    ^dope
    Girls don't enjoy sex w/ u! He AINT making them orgasm any time
    If you hear ammonia probably waking them up w/smelling salts after a sex crime
    ^lol
    w/ my bare fist i will break you. DONT RUN.....be a man and face it..
    Ill beat him so bad paramedics will have to get help from tiffany & co. to bracelet
    ^not a good closer

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    My style is full of violence. & You can trust, it’s not civil
    So after this you’ll actually have to admit.. yourself into a fuckin hospital
    ^lol generic as fuck but entertaining
    For your own safety.. Sit there, dont speak out of turn & just listen
    Or your fam will be checking a box, if you don’t follow the terms and conditions
    ^solid. reminds me of one of my bars this week
    U been prolonging death. I got bullets to make u die this hour
    & it’ll be exponential.. once I put 2 at your top, & send you to a higher power
    ^not feeling
    I tried to get him a chick. He had a loss of words & approached wit doubt
    But even after telling Miralax, his bitch ass still couldn’t seem to get that shit out
    ^seen a Miralax np recently so nah
    Ur not champ material yet. This fool needs some help
    But keep trying to conveyor skills, it only proves to us you cant make moves w/ da belt
    ^nice
    Ur girl don’t fuck with u no more.. but when she gave me head she was all joyful
    To the point that I had to halter top, while you can’t the bitch to take that off for you
    ^lol


    good battle. if Mir had a decent closer i woulda voted for him but..


    V/letter

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Letterman vs Miracle OPEN 4 VOTES

    Mirage-
    last 3 were decent. Armature being the best. Tiffany and co was pretty good.

    Leather man-
    I liked all of yours except the last two. Exponential was nice. Conveyer was played and the closer was weak.

    Decent battle.
    Vote weather man. Way more consistent, better bars overall
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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Letterman vs Miracle OPEN 4 VOTES

    Letter wins

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