Lethal Lyricist League: Joe Boston(0-1) vs Fresh(1-0) (fRESH wINS)

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

DUE DATE
Due Dates is THURSDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.



No Show
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Additional Stipulations





- Voting -
Each week, each competitor will be required to vote on at least 3 Battles.
Championship & Contenders Matches are required to be voted on by everyone.
Failure to comply, will result in vote deductions (1 link = 1 deducted vote).


- Extension Request -
All Extension Request must be submitted no later than 24 hours before deadline.
If your opponent has already dropped their verse, they can either accept or deny your request.
If your opponent has not dropped their verse, both will be granted extension IF your opponent agrees.

LASTE MINUTE EXTENSIONS
We are willing to make exceptions on some occassions but no matter the exception it will always be up to your opponent.



- Pic Battle Option -
If you want to do a pic battle, you and your opponent must agree in the check-ins

[Joe Boston]

Check

How many lines @Fresh

[Joe Boston]

12 @Fresh

Your bitch loves the way i slap her ass i leave 2 handprints n red blotches
The way im fucking Jessies Girl ill be humming out Rick Springfield tunes while he watches
Swift Timberland to the crotch bitch im a that much of a dirty fighter
Seabiscuit withdraw from my waist all black stallion you'll see me riding like Toby Mcguire
I own a gun empire so better be equipped head to toe in bulletproof attire
Destroying Habitat cuz the heat from the barrel is enough to cause a wild forest fire
Lets cut to the wire u scared of Boston on some honest shit
Only connected to Washington cuz ur fucking neck resembles that state monument
U love fat women smothered in condiments n fantasize licking it off their flesh
Ur like girl free dose assets u got i bet everytime u lick her pussy u can smell those on ur breath
How much netbeef he got left in em now to gain respect he gotta go soft
Tryna make a stretch? mark my words this blade'll expose ur stomach like a Kendra Wilkenson showoff
@God of War wanna hide this?

[Fresh]

Check

[Fresh]

your girl loves gettin smashed proper, s'why she won't stay w/ Joe
he gets home from work, it's just meander... Now boston doesn't know which way to go
had 1 good battle in the last 10 years n u still don't know the basics
Whatever floats ur boat I guess.. but remember Bein current doesn't mean ur goin places
Bags made a fool of u, and he's the biggest retard I know so thats what gets me
You went from posting dudes dicks outta spite to apologizing and ridin dick at NC's
this internet shit has u stressin, now everyone thinks ur a retarded faggot
You've pulled more hair out ya head than homer when he found out marge was pregnant
I heard u was a man of god, but it isn't helpin cuz this mans wack
and it's kinda fitting how after every prairie has material that lands flat
claims he's a boxer, but talks like he'll shoot ya
I'll off this deadbeat dad if he step son.. like his kid in the near future

[alphadog]

I own a gun empire so better be equipped head to toe in bulletproof attire
Destroying Habitat cuz the heat from the barrel is enough to cause a wild forest fire
^^^ this was a good attempt

Lets cut to the wire u scared of Boston on some honest shit
Only connected to Washington cuz ur fucking neck resembles that state monument
^^^ this was ok

Usual stuff from Joe. Over worded bars and not worded proper

Vs

had 1 good battle in the last 10 years n u still don't know the basics
Whatever floats ur boat I guess.. but remember Bein current doesn't mean ur goin places
^^^^ cool concept bit wordy

Bags made a fool of u, and he's the biggest retard I know so thats what gets me
You went from posting dudes dicks outta spite to apologizing and ridin dick at NC's
^^^^ ok personal

I heard u was a man of god, but it isn't helpin cuz this mans wack
and it's kinda fitting how after every prairie has material that lands flat
^^^ bit of a reach but good attempt

I've got fresh taking this with a bit more substance in his bars tbh both verses sucked tho lol

Vote fresh

[Greedy]

Joe:
Habitat-barely quoted this. I did, because the concept was decent.
Washington- same.
Kendra- I liked this concept. This was ya best line.

Vs

Habifreshitat:
Meander- forced to the high heavens. But decent idea.
Float-wordy, but I liked this. Coulda simplified it to make it dope.
Land flat- good idea, but not a fan of how this was displayed.


Vote fresh. Better material overall

[KnowP]

I own a gun empire so better be equipped head to toe in bulletproof attire
Destroying Habitat cuz the heat from the barrel is enough to cause a wild forest fire
How much netbeef he got left in em now to gain respect he gotta go soft
Tryna make a stretch? mark my words this blade'll expose ur stomach like a Kendra Wilkenson showoff



vs



had 1 good battle in the last 10 years n u still don't know the basics
Whatever floats ur boat I guess.. but remember Bein current doesn't mean ur goin places
Bags made a fool of u, and he's the biggest retard I know so thats what gets me
You went from posting dudes dicks outta spite to apologizing and ridin dick at NC's
I heard u was a man of god, but it isn't helpin cuz this mans wack
and it's kinda fitting how after every prairie has material that lands flat



joe had some good concepts but could of flipped his bars a bit better and with cleaner wording, would of been flames. Fresh had the LOTB with the going places flip and also had the better overall verse that landed harder imo


v. fresh

[Smog]

Jb

Closer

Vs

Bein current, dr nc

Jb Man U got concepts but ur wording softens the hell outta them, I mean they just sound like run on sentences man put commas if u got to but also reword them to hit ur opponent more.. I sounds like ur explaining to much shit to get to the point.. Closer was ok tho.. Fresh didn't drop flawless but his structure was better.. Plays felt forced too.. Still had a couple solid hits to take this.. Stay up yall

Vote fresh

[A. Diction]

Bags made a fool of u, and he's the biggest retard I know so thats what gets me
You went from posting dudes dicks outta spite to apologizing and ridin dick at NC's


Dead

[Kenny the OG]

Your bitch loves the way i slap her ass i leave 2 handprints n red blotches 
The way im fucking Jessies Girl ill be humming out Rick Springfield tunes while he watches
Is freshs name jessie in real life? If so, this is cool. If not, wtf.
Swift Timberland to the crotch bitch im a that much of a dirty fighter 
Seabiscuit withdraw from my waist all black stallion you'll see me riding like Toby Mcguire 
Too much wording ruined this punch. "Seabiscuit withdraw from..." could've been dope but the direction u took it in watered it down.
I own a gun empire so better be equipped head to toe in bulletproof attire 
Destroying Habitat cuz the heat from the barrel is enough to cause a wild forest fire
Ok
Lets cut to the wire u scared of Boston on some honest shit 
Only connected to Washington cuz ur fucking neck resembles that state monument 
Nah
U love fat women smothered in condiments n fantasize licking it off their flesh 
Ur like girl free dose assets u got i bet everytime u lick her pussy u can smell those on ur breath 
I like that concept but not the wording. Coulda condensed the setup and been more direct wit the punch. The wordplay was cool too.
How much netbeef he got left in em now to gain respect he gotta go soft 
Tryna make a stretch? mark my words this blade'll expose ur stomach like a Kendra Wilkenson showoff
Nah


your girl loves gettin smashed proper, s'why she won't stay w/ Joe
he gets home from work, it's just meander... Now boston doesn't know which way to go
nice. Very clean wording made this jab connect well. No forced wordplay, no extra descriptions that do nothing to add to the bar, none of that. solid way to open
had 1 good battle in the last 10 years n u still don't know the basics
Whatever floats ur boat I guess.. but remember Bein current doesn't mean ur goin places
2 for 2 so far. Clean
Bags made a fool of u, and he's the biggest retard I know so thats what gets me
You went from posting dudes dicks outta spite to apologizing and ridin dick at NC's
Personal attack. Solid and mean.
this internet shit has u stressin, now everyone thinks ur a retarded faggot
You've pulled more hair out ya head than homer when he found out marge was pregnant
Nah
I heard u was a man of god, but it isn't helpin cuz this mans wack
and it's kinda fitting how after every prairie has material that lands flat
Cool wordplay
claims he's a boxer, but talks like he'll shoot ya
I'll off this deadbeat dad if he step son.. like his kid in the near future
Kinda played concept but the execution saved it from being a dud


Fresh came dope to me here. I haven't read to much of his material but if he texts like this regularly I'll def be reading more. His biggest assets were his smooth, to-the-point wording style and concepts that generally were good. Wordplay on point too, no forcing. Once again Joe's frustrating to read bc he has the creativity and unique angles to really fuck people up but his execution just be off. Maybe that's the problem, he's so unorthodox that either he lands big or misses wildly. Just way to inconsistent. Interesting battle.

Vote- fresh

[Unfukwitable]

N/A

vs

I heard u was a man of god, but it isn't helpin cuz this mans wack
and it's kinda fitting how after every prairie has material that lands flat


a bunch of okay lines nothing really quoteable but overall one had the better worded verse the other had good ideas he just didnt know how to properly execute them. seen flames from both idk what happened here. v/Fresh

[Letterman]

I own a gun empire so better be equipped head to toe in bulletproof attire
Destroying Habitat cuz the heat from the barrel is enough to cause a wild forest fire

Vs

had 1 good battle in the last 10 years n u still don't know the basics
Whatever floats ur boat I guess.. but remember Bein current doesn't mean ur goin places
I heard u was a man of god, but it isn't helpin cuz this mans wack
and it's kinda fitting how after every prairie has material that lands flat

Meh battle. Fresh had more hits and the better attempts overall. Wasn't feeling much from Joe except the forest fire.

v/Fresh