Wax Poetic Chat

[Sammy]

@Poeta Demonio thanks for the read and kind words, sir. ur interpretation was spot on. i'll elaborate further on the concept. dead space are volume of air that remains in the body despite exhalation (or thats what my professor told me). not sure if u've ever been unlucky enough to go through a break up, but for the most part the challenge isn't "breaking up" its shaking off the habit of what we are accustomed to while we're in the relationship. Its always the little details. subtle things; nuances - all holding their own connotations. u can force urself to wipe the slate clean but its never really clean lol. i could probably sketch that concept a bit better tho, so, again, thanks for the read and feedback. i owe u one.

[Poeta Demonio]

Oh shit. I missed that physiological aspect! Super nice. If you re-draft those minor errors and re-post you got my vote for HOF this month! U dope. Even if you do write 'u' :P

[Emily]

@Elegant Elephant , you can write or ask whatever you like in here.
It's better to leave the hof section just for nominations : )

[Karaoshi]

Haiku thread is closed.
You told me there was haiku.
It's closed. You bastards.

[Jukon]

Haiku thread is closed.
You told me there was haiku.
It's closed. You bastards.

Sorry, had it closed so Emily could write what she needed to in it before anyone posted

It's Open now

[Emily]

Haiku thread is closed.
You told me there was haiku.
It's closed. You bastards.

a little tease before the dance.
youre so demanding geez lol

[Emily]

@Elegant Elephant , come talk to me in here about your writing, instead of chucking a spazz in your feed.
Come explain your concept so I can try to understand it.
Your last five drops were titled...

one liner hiaku 3
my AV wants to Haiku.. dont "judge" him
2 liner haiku 3
one liner haiku
untitled 60


it makes no sense to me cause the subject matter follows suit.
What are you on about?

[Truth Iscariot]

Thanks for the HOF Nom Emily

[mal diction]

those are actual pieces

[Karaoshi]

They're actual pieces of shit.

[Poeta Demonio]

@Emily You do realize he's just trolling right? You have been patient every step of the way, which is admirable haha but you're feeding into the game, therefore fueling it :P

[Emily]

Thanks for the HOF Nom Emily

Thanks for dropping heat Truth.
I loved the sizzle.

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those are actual pieces

Do we need a translator? From English to English? I know you're American and I'm Australian but is it gonna be that hard for us to communicate?
I named your actual pieces trying to show you how confusing they are, and I explained that the subject matter was just as confusing.
And your reply is "those are actual pieces".....I know Elegant Elephant. I know they're actual pieces.
What I don't know is why you're dropping one liners, some that make absolutely no sense at all.
And I think I've been pretty lenient so far but if you're gonna keep taking the piss then watch this space...

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They're actual pieces of shit.

Humble man. Few words. Golden.

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@Emily You do realize he's just trolling right? You have been patient every step of the way, which is admirable haha but you're feeding into the game, therefore fueling it :P

I like to give the benefit of the doubt. More than what I should. I'm watching where this is going.
The next piece of work will be make or break.
You yourself wrote in feed of his work that he...."...ACCIDENTALLY wrote something profound ..."
I'm giving him YET ANOTHER chance.
And I'll wait to see if I step on cash or crap.

[Soule]

Don't let this guy shit all over your forum, Em. You have bigger cojones than most of the men on here, get rid of his doo doo before it gets on your combat boots.

[Emily]

Don't let this guy shit all over your forum, Em. You have bigger cojones than most of the men on here, get rid of his doo doo before it gets on your combat boots.

I think we all know what a bitch I can be.
But for now, I'll give him another chance to rev me up if he feels that's what he wants to do.
Let it come and then let it rip.

[Soule]

I'll keep my eyes open and the beer close.