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    Uncle Eddie

    My tears tell of a hundred memories.....

    I wish I had the strength to fight them back
    But who could hold back the floodgates from failing when you're weakened
    I stand on the balcony and look over a speckled night-scape
    And I feel the support of my legs giving way

    I didn't know how bad it was....

    I was told that conditions has muted your creativity
    I don't hear the runs from the baby grand piano
    Nor the stories of a child fresh into the world reading a business section upside down
    I rather see the streaks of gray in that fresh Duke perm of yours
    Bobbing to a piece written from the endless chord progression you have amassed

    And even on this balcony, the dreams you opened up to me dissipates

    You told me while speeding in your 911 that dreams are plans waiting to be put into action
    Giving me my first opportunity to play in the 9 clouds
    Believing in my skills, opting success to pay for my mistakes
    Creating a giant secretly growing in your shadow
    Feeding a soul that drew finger paintings of blank canvases
    Coloring the tips of my expectation to intrude and destroy the blocks hindering me
    You gave me purpose when worlds counseled me with silence

    Now I wish I was there

    In the stars you now reside
    Making comets boogie in the rapture of your creativeness
    And I could show you that I learned by ear the chords of "Ms. Pac Man"
    working on the individual solos to see you smile
    Finally telling you that I appreciate the sacrifice of your legs to help me rise
    And I love you.....

    Keep playing on those pearly keys opening smiles and bright eyes
    Heaven can now get its groove back....Uncle Eddie...


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    Re: Uncle Eddie

    143, this is just beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.
    The words come out so honest and strong, they shine with love and respect.
    It's obvious the person you speak of was inspirational to you and you held the
    highest of opinions of him, someone that you look up to, almost to a muse like state.
    I really like this.
    I'm not going to quote a thing.
    Because 143, I love it all.
    It seeps emotion from it's lyrical pores.
    I admire the way you express yourself in this piece.
    I love the fact you didn't feel the need to amp it up with vocab, but
    instead concentrated on the sentiments and emotion, leaving it clean and pure.
    I've read it a few times, and each time, feel that chill up my spine.
    A beautiful, heart felt piece 143.

    You're still my favourite.
    And I look up to your worded ways.

    Top Read.


    R.I.P Eddie.
    Last edited by Emily; October 22nd, 2014 at 12:38 AM


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