deep beat sick catchy hook, your flow reminsd me of eminem on the way i am quick rhymes together, deep lyrics i think you just need to switch up the flow a little so ya dont get boring, and id turn down the stack vocals just a little bit sounds filtered, and 2nd verse is anticlimactic you go from hype to this awkward low monotone sound but other then that though real dope and deep keep it up
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justin its 3 different people on the verses fam thanx for the feed
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verse 1 . j dubbOriginally Posted by Bstill
verse 2. bstill
verse 3 . tension
chorus= ladyling( my girl)
but thanks fa da feed
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came back to listen 2 it again. good sign
on a side note....tell ya girl i need her in my life
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That Guy - That Guy ft. 45th
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i'll tell her friend
*high fives dre*
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Yeah first verse was cool. I like the hook very nice. The second was ok i felt him bring up the intensity more neat the end of the verse. 3rd verse was more intense and i like the chick doing the ad libs on it. chick has a great voice. Overall it was a straight collab and i would love to see more.
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I Loved the first verse the chrous nice 2nd verse 2 low couldnt hear it very well third verse was cool but was low to over all though a hot track and I would love to do a remix and collab together I love this beat.
thank you...and when u get around and start droppin sht..holla at me
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Beat is pretty decent haha.
First verse was pretty solid I thought. Decent mixing, flow was kind of choppy in places but it delivered well.
Hook kinda sounded different.
Second verse could have used more energy. Flow was more or less the same.
Lyrics were decent though.
Third verse was pretty decent too, kind of quieter delivery but had a little more fluctuation. Lyrics and flow were good though.
Pretty decent track.
Keep it up.
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Beat is pretty decent haha.
First verse was pretty solid I thought. Decent mixing, flow was kind of choppy in places but it delivered well.
Hook kinda sounded different.
Second verse could have used more energy. Flow was more or less the same.
Lyrics were decent though.
Third verse was pretty decent too, kind of quieter delivery but had a little more fluctuation. Lyrics and flow were good though.
Pretty decent track.
Keep it up.
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