Waiting On Life
Hope this ones better than the first version..
I'm enveloped in this sense of disgrace,
Hellbent on leaving this hellish place,
Filling dull time up in hellish ways,
Sex, Drugs, N' all the stuff parents hate,
But i still feel no love when the party fades,
4 hours ago, but it felt like 10 days,
My hours overlap and reverse like insane relays,
My minds in and out on some inverse delays,
Im so sin cursed,
Winters cold, Where the fucks my May?!,
Fuck i need to make my Spring today!,
Why's Spring come if it never stays?,
I'm tired of wakin' up,
Still in the same old drive way,
Tired of wakin' up,
Realizing it was juss a dream,
So tired, but time has foresaken me,
Day and night aren't what they seem,
My days are dark,
Long thoughts drawn out,
Tick but no tock,
The clocks on stall now,
A while back,
Me and time must've had a fall out,
Cause like miles these days stack,
No chance ill make 365,
I'm still on that driveway vibe,
Hit the gas, while i inhale monoxide,
Everythings spinning as time dies,
Then the Devil starts whispering sweet cries,
Then shots fire like arson crimes,
Screams in the background,
Like barking whines,
Clocks bring that sad sound,
Now i see stop signs,
(heavy breathing)
Now i'm awake,
Sweat breaks, wide eyes,
I can't walk, it's like i'm on skates,
I can't talk, like my mouth is closed gates,
Time controls me,
Deadup like imposed fates,
So sublime when i'm in those states,
Where has the time gone?,
Nowhere, Like closed freights,
Feedback would be greatlyy appreciated!
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