Love this beat, so as im all alone in my house tonight i thought id write a verse for it.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...396/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...836/index.html
Lyrics if you want to read along
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Last edited by Jonezy; July 11th, 2010 at 09:47 PM
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only one verse?pretty decent alltho listenin in headphones sounds like im listenin to two people from ear to ear so it fucks with the quality
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ahhh, dope song to remix...
lets see what cha do.
try not layering your entire verse, i know you think it sounds cool, but really no one does that anymore.
highlight the bars you want to stand out not the entire thing. thats just a personal opinion btw.
flow was solid throughout but nothing really stood out.
only one verse???
boo boo.
but yeha
6/10
keep dropping.
cheers for listening
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theres no one that overdubs an entire verse? eminem does for one.....
stacking is used A LOT in recordings, its all about making the vocal big, try panning the takes around the stereo field, add a different Eq/delay to set the takes apart.
you must nail the takes though...and i tend to have one lead take and set the others so there near subliminal with volume wise
cool song tho, sure youve dropped this b4 jonezy?
if u want another verse on it, im game...
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Hip Hop Uk Resurrection
Lol im shit at mixing man, i just do what i think sounds good and go with it..nah aint dropped this before, only done it last night lad...yeah man sound..i just found the beat like this, so dunno if u can edit the beat to add another verse? or ill try n get someone to do it...anyone ever get on that other track?
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Not bad at all, you should slow down to and say ya words more clearly, you have a nice flow tho, lyrics were pretty str8, got the voice to do some work for me...i'll see what i can do props to the drop tho
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
cheers lad
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lol...love this beat....not feelin the echno effect on ur voice....lyrics is pretty good also...overal its not bad, chorus is hard lol
Dblock, Ruff Ryders, LOX, Cudi, Deadmau5
the flow is good, tho i cant make out some words. good shit tho
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this was a good mix i like the lyrics it was alittle hard to make out some words at parts maybe because of your accent that can be kinda hard i understand i have one to i liked your flow on this to good work
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this went very well imho. the rhythm was ryt on and the lyrics were pretty good. keep it up
I thought this was pretty dope, I can see how people might say it's hard to understand, but I personally like what the accent does to it. Plus your lyrics are pretty positive, which is cool. *thumbs up*
cheers boy.. appreciate the comments
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Tupac style attempt at the flow...needs a lil work...just to make it more crisp...I do like that staccato style though
feelin this beat...good choice there
lyrics seem well thought-out
not a bad track
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