Lucky escape

[SHOK-VAL-U]

I wasnt born this way,i turned to fuckin with fait,
most the girls i ever cared for are mothers or pregnant,i call that a lucky escape,
you'll find me on cloud 9,lookin to jam,
i'm still a kid myself,why the fuck do i wanna be pushin' a pram?
i got luck on my side,gettin through life steadily
livin in the past,that way i got my whole future ahead of me,
but the truth is that there will never be
someone who visions life so care free and cleverly,
i'm there for me,i dont need to be a loyal husband or host for em'
i'll be there at midnight,but in the morning i'm ghost on em',
after roastin em',they'll realise what i was acting kindly for
see there face in the street,the one i bailed on the night before,
probably a slag,or might be whore
thats their name to me,whats the point in resighting for?
all i hear is 'i thought you liked me more'
'thats why i felt close enough to let you slide it raw',
but its like fuck that i live for the day
so before she's finished speakin ive already walked away,
lucky escape is what it is,yeh i'm rude in the worst case
in first place,who's prepared to donate sperm,but only on a birds face...


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[Buzz_LiGHTY3AR]

Interesting topic to write about, it couldnt be more truthful. Some of the lines didnt flow well together but I got the gist of what you were aiming to accomplish..

Also.. I didnt quite get the last line, maybe Im too naive' to understand what it means.

7.5/10

[Buzz_LiGHTY3AR]

Interesting topic to write about, it couldnt be more truthful. Some of the lines didnt flow well together but I got the gist of what you were aiming to accomplish..

Also.. I didnt quite get the last line, maybe Im too naive' to understand what it means.

7.5/10