Poetry Elevation

[Laureate]

Here's how this works.

Post here with a link to your most recent poem.
I'll select one person to work with.
Only post here if you can write up to 3 poems a week and take constructive criticism without being offended or hurt. This is only for people who want to get better at writing. I am not guaranteeing anything, but I hope to help people who want to learn do so.

Here are my credentials.

17X PS HoF
7X OM HoF
1 Legends piece

Samples of my work:
From the Thoughts of an Artist
Poetry for the Broken
The Dying Lake
Swimming with Sharks

[Masahiko.]

Here and now big ben.

[Yazoo]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=420053

[frostbytee]

is this suppose to be like rap? its a walk into the dark everyday i wake. no walk threw the park always invaded by snakes.rats out the sewer to nark never cut me a break.jobs fly out the window like the litteral vase.cops got me in invisible cuffs with a pittiful case.i got the riddles and shakes. life aint all skittles and cake.so i get the giggles and bake.when i close my eyes at the end of the night i stack the hope of the day cross my hands and i pray.
i really your need help