"To The Beat"

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*bobbin to the beat, walking down the street, jotting as I’m watching my feet*

She’s taking over, my one desire
I find her stones from the beat, scribble my flint and what we’re making is fire
Embrace the thump-thump, tic-tic, clap and the boom
And vibe….to it, get live….to it inside my room
And ride…through it, write what I think, think as I do it
Do as I’ve been influenced, close but slightly congruent
Parallel till its fluent with society’s ruins
An old empire inverted from the variety’s doings
Did I confuse you?....lets take it back, but don’t get lost
Her rhythms force you to think, attention is all she cost
You save up your little change, she loves it when she gets bought
Pick the right girl, and she just might take you to deeper thought
See in my world, she makes you do what she wants….we’re puppets
But fuck it, she makes me lose control…..and I love it!
Don’t touch it!....just let her play out, till she start trippin
And trust I only hit her if she skippin….MUSIC!



Just something quick I made during General Quarters(navy fire drill).

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[SpitItReal27]

She’s taking over, my one desire
I find her stones from the beat, scribble my flint and what we’re making is fire
Embrace the thump-thump, tic-tic, clap and the boom
And vibe….to it, get live….to it inside my room

Gotta admit, the onomatopoeia you had goin with the sound words was definitely chill. The overall piece seemed like it held back a little, but overall it was aight. Felt like I was hearing someone actually spit it at certain points and that made it live. Very nice job.