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  1. June 2nd, 2009, 06:37 AM #1
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    "Hard Times"

    Here it is..

    I only stay alive an' survive from rappin',
    I got it all in my family from pill heads to crack addicts!
    Pops always bitchin' when he's without his dope,
    Moms workin all day just to come home broke!
    She's losing hope, bout to give up on My Father,
    He gives her money, then takes it.. Why Bother!
    I have so many problems it get's tiring,
    D.u.I cant even get work noone's hiring!
    All this shit Compiles an' Combines,
    Keepin' Smiles from my Rhymes,
    Makin' everything seem Hostile in my Mind!
    To my pops.. I mean Damn Pa,
    You even takin' money from my Grandma!
    Your mother That Is, tellin lies an' Blabbin',
    Just to support your prescription Habbit!
    Knowledge of being a father you no longer Have It,
    It's sad, but now.. You only support my RAPPIN'!!


    Let me know what you think.. I'm going to go get some links for you now..
  2. June 2nd, 2009, 06:45 AM #2
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    Re: "Hard Times"

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...od-399834.html
  3. June 2nd, 2009, 08:52 AM #3
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    Re: "Hard Times"

    u need 2 links.......

    and this was mediocre...topic cool....didn't flow very well...i couldn't catch it so i just had to read it through.....
  4. June 2nd, 2009, 06:07 PM #4
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    Re: "Hard Times"

    it was straight homie, Jus step up on some Completity of your rhymes, make it long, EXPLAIN in this type of piece Its DETAIL DETAILS DETAILS.. good ish though
  5. June 2nd, 2009, 08:34 PM #5
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    Re: "Hard Times"

    This almost seemed like a vent peice.. well respected in it's own right. The flow was pretty basic but the rhyme scheme was clever. Nothing to eye popping about this but in a peice like this what really stands out is the emotion, in wich you've clearly captured. Stay up, lookin' foward to see more from you.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...nk-399845.html
  6. June 3rd, 2009, 03:05 AM #6
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    Re: "Hard Times"

    closed. pm me one more link and I'll reopen it.
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