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    The ancient enemy

    Fiends for crack bring green backs inside jean pants/
    Ive even seen cats squeeze cats and get they cream back/
    seen clean people turn evil for green paper with eagles/
    As soon as pockets get feable we all turn leathal/
    then there are the men who are most evil of all/
    the big corporations strippin people of jobs/
    left thousands devistated so theyre forced into violence/
    while the man is sittin back gettin fat and smilin/
    Im not talkin bout one man, he comes in all forms and sizes/
    the only shape he doesnt take is kindness/
    see money is a friend to me but also my enemy/
    different places, different identities but its been around for centuries/
    Some call it peso, dollar and even doe/
    but what would it be worth if your bank went broke?/
    money is just a symbol that its worth something/
    thats why axels smarter, stackin gold bricks like lunch meat/

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    Re: The ancient enemy

    I'll edit this when you post your two links of feed you've done for others.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...el-396270.html
    rtf on this for one link

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    Re: The ancient enemy

    hey i just started doin this site 2 hours ago. idk what all that means

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    u gotta FEED others work n post two links to em homie...or they will shut u down like tha SWAT...yo mayn good lil flow i was rele diggin it...last two lines had me ROLLIN!!!...yo go peep my shyt...KEEP UP THA HOOD WORK!!!

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    Re: The ancient enemy

    Tbh, the message is there but it doesn't flow too well. Needs more polishin' bro.
    I killed Hitler to be a greater evil/ I spit at Lucifer and killed all the devils.
    I like my death metal gigs on the darkest nights/ while I like my rap and pussy damn tight.

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