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Thread: My First One

  1. #1
    Newbie nate_the_great's Avatar
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    My First One

    YO SON WHAT I AM BOUT SPIT DOG MIGHT HURT YA
    THE WAY i RAP THEY CALL IT HIGHWAY MURDER
    THE 9 IT'S LIKE A SUPA SQUIRTER IT MIGHT GET U WET
    i BEEN SHOT MORE THAN THEM NIGGAS IN IRAQ
    bUT WHO AM I TO BLAME
    WHEN PIG ON BLOK SEARCHING FOR ME/
    LIKE I SUDDIAN HUSSIAN/
    OR BIN LADDEN YO THIS KNEW/ i BEEN SHAGGING BEEN Rapping
    sense I was a young buck now the 9 have nigga star struck
    But i not talking about the one the sky
    the one that fly and have people duckng for their lives
    I cross nigga up like j kidd on live
    yo i hear u was hard at clapping
    But I got commando in the club that will kill your captin
    To be honest i never up close murk a nigga
    but i got punch line that hurt u nigga
    I can't wait tull i make Jay z figgas
    But dont get me wrong i anit trying to jigga my nigga
    I trying to the great one
    have niggas like '' used to hate him'' now I like him cause bitches want to chase him
    I like a pencil i just erase them when they mess up
    now i use the tec to clean the mess up
    I bout to stop cause i getting bored now rest in peace to my nigga Tupic Shakure NOW
    JAY Z
    IT'S MORE POOR RAPPER THAN RICH RAPPERS SO DONT BELEIVE EVERYTHING
    YOU HEAR

    NATE

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    and the tai kwon monks ! Methane's Avatar
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    I Wern't Feelin' the Caps Lock At the Beginnin' lol Was an Aiight Drop... The Barz Seemed Stretched Towardz the End. It Wern't too Bad Fo Ya First...

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    the pound is stronger than the dollar, HOLLA !

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    Newbie nate_the_great's Avatar
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    Good looks Methane i make sure I PUT THAT CONSIDERATION
    NEXT TIME GOOD LOOKS B
    JAY Z
    IT'S MORE POOR RAPPER THAN RICH RAPPERS SO DONT BELEIVE EVERYTHING
    YOU HEAR

    NATE

  4. #4
    Narcicyst
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    aight this was a simple rhyme...sorry but i wasnt feelin it...need to work on your complexity and shit...i'm an asshole critic as i say in a lot of replies you need to have good meats and similies in your shit dawg...keep elevatin though...one

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    ehh wasnt too bad for ur 1st time..keep throwin it down

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    You need to leave 2 links of replies or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    BEST topical writer... Endeva.'s Avatar
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    not my scene... work on complexity and better topics/events.... short and sweet, maybe not sweet.....lol
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    You droppd it aite man, u got sum of it across so its cool.
    Keep doing ya thing tho.
    ill

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