(PEEP) I'll Murder You ft. Genesis(PEEP)

[country]

[Verse 1- Country]
ill hex you with curses, inject you with verses
spit in your mouth, disrespect you with purpose
disconnectin your cervix,theyll collect u in searches
tha type, where theyll try, ta ressurect u in churches
disect you with words n, pull ur spine out ur neck
put wheels on ur casket, see if u can ride out ur death
pull a knife out ur desk, snatch tha life out ur breath
shove ur grille down ur throat, let you ryhme out ur chest
ill time out ur best, put your mind ta sleep
hit ur mouth wit tha barrel, fuckin resize ur teeth
bunch of salad bowl rappers, ur not designed for beef
theres signs ur weak, despite your speech
fuck, write my name in blood, ill sign ur cheeks
ull die for me, shut down ur brain wit corroded thoughts
put toxins, in ur topics, watch u faggots choke n cough
cut u open dawg, fill ur fuckin corpses with C4
let explosions, explode n, blow organs all over your keyboard

[Chorus- Genesis]
I'll murder you
Better bust back, 'fore you get ya guts clapped
If you think it's just rap, fuck that!
I'll murder you
I'ma rush your porch, kick in the door,
Kill you then spit on ya corpse, fuck remorse!
I'll murder you
Come where you live, run in your crib
And put one in your ribs, right in front of ya kids
I'll murder you
Keep thinkin' it's a game, 'til you're leakin' out ya brain
Just for speakin' on my name, it's a shame

[Verse 2- Genesis]
I'll murder you faggots, burn you with matches, and cans
Of flammable gases, then throw you in the furnace and turn you to ashes!
I'll serve you for practice, on every verse I'm a savage
Hurdle the planet backwards, and turn the earth off it's axis
Preserve you in plastic, I have a thirst for the madness
I'll burst out my casket, jack the hearse and swerve it in traffic
I'm the serpent of rappin', that mastered murderous tactics
And just converted to catholic, to put a curse on the baptist
Worship satanic idols, and just reworded a passage
In the bible, to get the mass and service in churches to chant it
I'm the most disturbin' version of Manson
That'll grab the burner and blast it to have you doing vertical backflips
Til you're in the hospital, with your sternum collapsin'
On top your abdominals, causin' internal contractions
The nurses'll panic, have a nervous reaction
Call for surgical status, hit a nerve and cause permanent damage

[Chorus]





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[Intellexual]

I dislike the theme and context of the chorus, but can appreciate the skill each exhibited.
I'll serve you for practice, on every verse I'm a savage
Hurdle the planet backwards, and turn the earth off it's axis
Preserve you in plastic, I have a thirst for the madness
I'll burst out my casket, jack the hearse and swerve it in traffic
Outstanding. Its (not it's), btw.

[Orijin]

this is aight...from both sides i felt more flow then anything...still dope though

[therealsmoke]

yeah this was basically nothin but flow, raw fuckin flow

conceptually there were a couple good lines here n there

salad bowl/beef line was decent

"Hurdle the planet backwards, and turn the earth off it's axis"

sounded kinda similar to a line from Canibus in one of his freestyles

its all good though, nice collab, woulda been better with a lil more variety in the content, but for what it was this is sick

[100 k.]

was ok... flow was steady but too much of the same, topic was definately a good look and was on point all the way through. vocab was there as well. you got it.

[country]

sometimes i think people put "to much" into verses


like here we was jus flexin flow and staying on point


not everyline has to be a metaphorical punchline


preciate the feeds

[verbalweaponz]

classic country verse....very good man. whoever the other dude is, your styles are close to the same...this could of all been one dude. all nice. the hook has some forced parts...but whatever. nice drop.

[verbalweaponz]

and LMAO@ "ft genesis"

[Esc0BosS]

...Word...

First Pussy Ass Nigga
Opens up with some forced multiz...but after that they wasn't too bad, i guess... a decent job on the multi tip...
Flow was on point thru out as always...but the whole shit was too simplistic... buh letme guess the excuse...you just flossing riiight?? lol
Real talk, overall the first verse for me was barely above some average shit for most part...
disect you with words n, pull ur spine out ur neck
put wheels on ur casket, see if u can ride out ur death
^ But there was moments where you stepped up where i was like word?? lol

and smh @ your closer... u single handedly playing any computer references...stop!!!

Second Dude
Murdered it lyricly...a few forced multiz... but considering the fuckin intensity on the rhyme scheme... shit, it comes off pretty dope; giving it a mean ass flow aswell...............
But not much else...
Til you're in the hospital, with your sternum collapsin'
On top your abdominals, causin' internal contractions
^ like shit would sound dope... but thats really it...
I'll serve you for practice, on every verse I'm a savage
Hurdle the planet backwards, and turn the earth off it's axis
^ this is the only shit that projects anything other than a ill rhyme scheme and a dope flow...

Overall i'd say actually a pretty nice collab... cuz i think what country is missing in his verse, genesis brings...and vice verse... but you both still missing anything special on this shit...just my opinion

neva a hate thing, it is what it is... but take it how ya want.... #1 stay up

[country]

lmfao man,all you motherfuckers think that a verse has to be filled wit puynchlines n meta4s when over half u cats DONT bring that shit anyways


and for the record the first line wasnt forced multis it was done for a purpose and ment to be the way it is

most of you dudes have stretched the fuck out lines, going 2 miles long, couldnt use in audio for nathan. have a nice met4 or punch here or there and yet come in here like your all "god emcee"

lyrically not of of you can match me, simple as

im not talkin no battle shit, im talkin jus straight spitting. freestyle,keystyle,prewritten

tired of the fuckin hate, me n genesis was discussing this in msn we KNEW this would happen, cuz its to poetic here.
yall wanna see some poetical met4ical fuckin phenomenon , but when yall spit that way

holla at me n i'll drop a gem for ya


but until levels is equal.

lmao
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[Esc0BosS]

dizzamn at the hostility lol... i dont even fuck with punches and meta4z too much, and i aint mention em... so what yo hollerin duke??

edit; and shit was forced at the start son lol

[country]

no hostility, and nothing was forced in this , im the first dude to say something of mine was force


ill hex u wit curses

curses as in fuck word cureses and voodoo curses


inject u wit verses

put my lyrics into u



no hate or hostility

but fuckin average my nuts

i get on msn wit any emcee herre n cypher thenj we post that shit n we see who the fuck is average

ery reply to me is the same


then i see yall cays givin props to fuckin garbage verses

like the prison shit

[Esc0BosS]

eh...i feel you, but check that prison drop...tell me the rhyme scheme wasnt ill... and what i give dude props on other than his rhyme scheme???...

and wtf @ the expo on the multi?...
ill hex you with curses, inject you with verses
spit in your mouth, disrespect you with purpose
disconnectin your cervix,theyll collect u in searches

^ you tellin me that aint come off forced?????

lol you got me on a cypher...< thats just real talk... but you talking but having any dudes LYRICALLY...on a written??...smh you know i say it how it is, i dont give a dude props just cuz a nutha dude did...
^ if you wanna take it like a bitch...go ahead...

[techh215]

man both yall killed it. amazin flow, good structure, good vocab. easy to read but had that raw ghutta style....i like it

I'm the most disturbin' version of Manson
That'll grab the burner and blast it to have you doing vertical backflips
-tough line

[Orijin]

lmfao man,all you motherfuckers think that a verse has to be filled wit puynchlines n meta4s when over half u cats DONT bring that shit anyways


and for the record the first line wasnt forced multis it was done for a purpose and ment to be the way it is

most of you dudes have stretched the fuck out lines, going 2 miles long, couldnt use in audio for nathan. have a nice met4 or punch here or there and yet come in here like your all "god emcee"

lyrically not of of you can match me, simple as

im not talkin no battle shit, im talkin jus straight spitting. freestyle,keystyle,prewritten

tired of the fuckin hate, me n genesis was discussing this in msn we KNEW this would happen, cuz its to poetic here.
yall wanna see some poetical met4ical fuckin phenomenon , but when yall spit that way

holla at me n i'll drop a gem for ya


but until levels is equal.

lmao
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preach my brotha!...and that is EXACTLY why i spit the way i do...after all...you can't impress people that feel they are the illest thing on earth no matter what....

*looks around*

Kinda like CONSTRUCT lmao