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    I'm Ill! (A Milli Pt. 2!)

    Used a Lil' Wayne sample, first time sampling!
    Check this out man!

    I still suck at beat making!

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    Re: I'm Ill! (A Milli Pt. 2!)

    Would be hard to rap over, unless the topic was right...would make a tight intro thou...nyce beat jus take out lil waynez shyt, unless u jus use him in the chorus....good shyt thou overall , fer first beat....

    what do u use to make ur beats

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    Re: I'm Ill! (A Milli Pt. 2!)

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    Re: I'm Ill! (A Milli Pt. 2!)

    This was a straight beat. The drums go hard. The chopped hook is iight. My main issue with this beat is that the lil wayne vocals dont mesh at ALL with the melody. The melody of the synth & piano sounds too happy for someone to be sayin "motherfucker" on.

    And you need links... so go feed my beat.

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    Re: I'm Ill! (A Milli Pt. 2!)

    If this is your first beat then it aint bad, if you've been at it awhile then it leaves quite a bit to be desired. The beat itself was aight, nuthin special. The sample kinda fucked it up. The beat doesn't exactly have a "Muthafucka I'm Ill!" feel to it. if that makes sense....
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    Re: I'm Ill! (A Milli Pt. 2!)

    this is better than your last one... I don't think the sample really fits the overall vibe of the beat either... the rhythm is decent, the melody is okay too... it's not particularly powerful, so it really doesn't grab my attention... but, you're still new to this... the important thing is to keep learnin' and gettin' better each time... practice with shit, get familiar with what CAN be done... then in time you'll be pretty good at actually doin' it... and be humble, don't get it in your head that you're dope until you're actually pretty dope...

    anyway... not bad, just kinda dull... keep it up though...


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    Re: I'm Ill! (A Milli Pt. 2!)

    Quote Originally Posted by Big Keeb View Post
    this is better than your last one... I don't think the sample really fits the overall vibe of the beat either... the rhythm is decent, the melody is okay too... it's not particularly powerful, so it really doesn't grab my attention... but, you're still new to this... the important thing is to keep learnin' and gettin' better each time... practice with shit, get familiar with what CAN be done... then in time you'll be pretty good at actually doin' it... and be humble, don't get it in your head that you're dope until you're actually pretty dope...

    anyway... not bad, just kinda dull... keep it up though...
    I never said I was dope... Thanks though.

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    Re: I'm Ill! (A Milli Pt. 2!)

    no, I wasn't sayin' that you did... it was just advice... I meant that some people get to where they think they're the shit and quit listenin' to people tryin' to help...


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    Re: I'm Ill! (A Milli Pt. 2!)

    lemme see some links to stuff you replied too.
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    Re: I'm Ill! (A Milli Pt. 2!)

    not feelin it at all, i see the concept but its just a messed and repetitive.

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