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  1. April 6th, 2008, 05:49 AM #1
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    Reverse Psychology

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  2. April 6th, 2008, 05:50 AM #2
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    Re: Reverse Psychology

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...pe-365145.html

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  3. April 6th, 2008, 06:27 PM #3
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    Re: Reverse Psychology

    This piece was dope.....how you could like read it both ways....made the ending middle and beggining change places....it was a dope effect you went for with this piece.
    Very innovative little thig-a-ma-jig//

    Stepped out of the house, making light commodity out of sin
    Tired of being a loser, so I made the choice for a shoddy win
    Picked up my gun off the table, under my shirt, oddly tucked it in
    Devised a plan to no longer hide in plain sight among sanitary men
    My insanity’s been carrying me, now it’s beyond merely impinged
    Woke up early and set my grin…this would be the day I’d kill

    ……….my imaginary friend

    dope lines man...but....what did it mean by...My "Imaginary Friend"....
    He was talking bout hisself right?....
    or am I off-base.
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  4. April 6th, 2008, 06:40 PM #4
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    Re: Reverse Psychology

    well...it's his imaginary friend...he's basically a grown ass man who has an imaginary friend who he decides to kill...remember fight club? it's kinda on the same level as that...so it could be...from the reader's standpoint...that he shot himself and beat himself up and was talking to himself...just like in fight club...or that he is completely insane and he shot, killed, beat up, and talked to the air...the second one makes him seem a bit crazier...but whichever way you want to take it as a reader...kinda like...choose your own adventure lol.
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    Re: Reverse Psychology

    yup...im uppin once again...back on the uppin path....yuuuup....aaahhhh
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  6. April 7th, 2008, 01:48 PM #6
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    Re: Reverse Psychology

    WHOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!

    This was fucking wicked!!!!

    I loved the way you could flip this both way, ..Thats a very creative idea, and a very interesting thing to do, ..

    After reading this both ways, I am still at a loss for many words, so instead of whittling on, boring people with a reply that basically says how much i really fuckin liked this piece ima just say...

    I really fuckin liked this piece!!

    Count this as nominated for HoF

    Much respect, keep up the great work man

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    Re: Reverse Psychology

    Also, I'd love to hear this audio, one way over a gentle beat, then the alternate way over a demonic beat, .. it would work superb, .. maybe with an interchange in the middle..so it stays one track...just a thought..
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    Re: Reverse Psychology

    thanks for the feed, nom, and interest...im glad you enjoyed the piece...and i plan to record some of these...so you might see/hear this one in the near future ya dig?...as for those of you sleepin...start peepin...dig it...dig it hard
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    Re: Reverse Psychology

    last duplicate
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    Re: Reverse Psychology

    cheated out of an up with the multiple posts lol
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    Lightbulb Re: Reverse Psychology

    Quote Originally Posted by Writeamus Prime View Post
    thanks for the feed, nom, and interest...im glad you enjoyed the piece...and i plan to record some of these...so you might see/hear this one in the near future ya dig?...as for those of you sleepin...start peepin...dig it...dig it hard
    Fahreal? You an audio head too man? You got any links to stuff you done?
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  12. April 8th, 2008, 10:29 AM #12
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    Re: Reverse Psychology

    Really dope. I loved it. I think it made more sense and was easier to follow from bottom to top IMO. It was a hit and miss at some points from top to bottom, like: "Stepped out of the house, making light commodity out of sin
    Tired of being a loser, so I made the choice for a shoddy win"
    Picked up my gun off the table, under my shirt, oddly tucked it in"

    Here, in these several lines it explains how he steps out of the house and THEN picks his gun up off of the table?

    Very very creative idea though, I'd love to see more works from you.
    Ill make you say "Unkle!" *wink*

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    Re: Reverse Psychology

    this was damn good, good imagery, good vocab, it was such an easy read
    and the ending was perfect...

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    Re: Reverse Psychology

    Been done before, but it's fucking dope man. You came at this so nicely, and knew exactly how to state your words, the flow was smooth, the structre was great...it was kinda long, but great in detail. A nice piece here man, deff worth HOF imo. I'll be dropping in a nom. Pz.
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  15. April 10th, 2008, 12:34 PM #15
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    Re: Reverse Psychology

    meh...just thought id up this for the hell of it
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