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    The Haters

    The Haters

    Bodies in bags- flags on a hearse steering packs
    Of medicals to rich kids so cynical in attacks
    They burst when faced with disgraced first
    Men & women- natives slain & pillaged- cursed
    Staked & ravaged- their life slain & miscarried
    married into honorable chains tied chained- blamed
    for lame excuses by husbands disdained & abusive
    tame teenagers bullied by bastards bullying so bold
    so cold- the shoulders shown, pointed out the door
    old men hating young, young men taunting all
    flaunting their wealth- upper class call to stall
    attention- poor have the tension of feeding a kid so small
    gets to them & they blame all who stand in the hall
    stopping them getting their coupons to feed the kid
    the kid hungry blaming his parents for bad parenting

    We all Blame…we all Hate

    Meet Pedi Pauper a simpleton with a simple son
    you’d call him retarded- he’d shake & sniffle glum
    his dad’s got a bad taste in his jaw
    and the food it’s so raw
    but the money’s so low he can’t want more so for
    him to survive he drives a rubbish truck, his luck sucks
    when he views his only son as a weekly cheque- fuck
    he’s going mental And he finds his state so detrimental
    it’s essential to stay alive- eating Chinese off oriental
    streets & he seems to believe the rich are his enemies
    no clemency- he’ll give no mercy his hate acts detrimentally

    Meet Richey Rich, buying a poor bitch- or bitches
    so they can salivate over the bit which itches
    his rims count double in inches with leeches
    as his friends- he inherited more that speech can speak
    so it leaves all speechless- his aimless life remains
    on track but his lack of motivation plus his tactless claims
    of hate against the poor breed- dogs on the streets
    his friends call his comments crazy, but maybe
    he can’t help but hate the poor men, kids and ladies

    When Richey met Pedi

    Pedi goes up “This the Rich house” he asks
    “Yeah it is as much as your poverty is” Richey basks
    in his monetary glory, momentarily elated but wait
    Pedi burns debating whether to smack his face in hate
    “I hate you Rich people, HATE HATE HATE you all,
    you think your above us, nah, you’re all gonna fall,
    fall low” the tendrils of hate grabbing Richey’s throat
    he chokes but screeches “You poor are all alike, you dote
    upon us, wait for us to feed you, at our every beck & call
    I FUCKIN HATE HATE HATE you all”

    soul mates it appears- two angry men with a lot of hate
    loving to insult, condensate, bully and aggravate
    They don’t hate their social stature, they just hate us
    people who live- they made a new clique of haters
    spreading their hate, their anger in all forms uniformed
    hate and good is sedated with a lying chloroform so clear
    this world runs on hate it appears
    hate dominates us, our family & all our peers

    We all Blame…we all Hate


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    Re: The Haters

    ^^^
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    Re: The Haters

    Fuck you!!!
    IT'S MELANSON

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    Re: The Haters

    Quote Originally Posted by Melanson View Post
    Fuck you!!!
    I don't let little boys fuck me for 2 reasons....1 I'm not gay and second I don't want to feature on Dateline. Pz.

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    Re: The Haters

    This is getting slept on....and I don't see why.
    I really liked this alot....the rhymescheme was dope.
    there was places where it was choppy other places where it was real uniform.
    spots where it was kinda abab...then there were places where u killed the vocab and internals.

    I think the storyline might be just a tad bit played but you're twist on it was really dope and original.
    Like how you said we created a new generation of haters....or something to that effect.
    I was really digging that part.

    some of my fav. lines in this piece:

    They don’t hate their social stature, they just hate us
    people who live- they made a new clique of haters
    spreading their hate, their anger in all forms uniformed
    hate and good is sedated with a lying chloroform so clear
    this world runs on hate it appears
    hate dominates us, our family & all our peers

    We all Blame…we all Hate

    these lines were real deep and real poetic....very dope Baron.
    thanks for the interesting Read.

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    Re: The Haters

    thanks for the comments man.
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
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    Re: The Haters

    This peace is nice man. I was entertained throught out the entire read.
    Great flip too although i felt that your concept wasn't that fresh.
    There is a lot of truth to this piece which works in your favour man
    Flow was crisp as usual and elements of your poetic nature were
    evident in this piece man. Great drop Imo....

    When you get to it. Pliz RFT this:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ne-365000.html

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