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    ...to WhoM it MaY ConcerN...

    As I sit back tryna think 'bout how I should word this
    Juss let me start off by sayin' I know I wasn't perfect
    But tried to perfect tha difference between good and evil
    In tha jist of it I always thought nobody was my equal
    This letter should had a prequel but I never had time 2 write it
    Ignited tha flames of hell seen tha spirit of Satan but afraid 2 fight it
    I know my wrongs need 2 B righted but Im not brave enuff 2 admit
    In tha sense of sin I've become an addict Yea maybe juss a tad bit
    I know it's tragic I see tha gold and have tried to snatch it I confess
    Soon they'll pollute tha air I breathe that's why this is in ink and not in breaths
    I've got nuthin' left to lose except prolly a guilty conscience
    Nah that nonsense lyin' to U would prove I have no logic
    So I'll spit out tha truth and hope that it won't hurt too much
    Disobey yea I do such things and see evil but still wish to touch
    Tha tree of knowledge panthers and klu klux reality Im tryna find
    This was 'posed to B a serious letter ur prolly wonderin' why Im tryna rhyme
    But tha hour is mine til it's over which is pretty soon so Im not sober
    Tha luv of my life was takin' away so I can't be caressed and hold her
    I know U prolly wanna kill me send a send me sumthin that might pack doom
    But my ink is now runnin' thin so when U get this please can U write back soon

    Sincerely,
    MeNTiLL


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    Blah this was juss a key wit an idea i had on mind

    A.i

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    Deep........

    very nice, felt almost every aspect of that ryme...

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    yea.. mad emotinal piece.. what's with all the depressing suicidal raps on this page tho.. you can't all have life issues, shit I'm 17 have a kid, a shitty job an' no high school education... an' even I'm not that depressed... ne-way, I liked the way you delivered this one tho.. (more so than others).. the letter form was very unique, an' you pulled it off nicely...
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    I got the feeling you were writing that to a family member or girlfriend or something from being in Iraq or something. Like you are a soldier preparing for combat and getting ready to be sent to war. This was a deep piece and I liked it a lot Mentill. Keep droppin your goodness

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    Damn Girl!

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    This was hot...nice for a key...

    Emotion was felt on all levels...

    P.e.a.c.e




    P.S. It's KU klux, not KLU klux....lol

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    LoL....My bad on that 13th....But good look on tha correction....And thanx for tha replies peeps....And props to Domain for catchin' on to where I was goin' wit this....Peace

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    DAmn Deeep Piece i felt tha emotion u put in man nice Job

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