Ray Zr. vs Paramik

[Ray Zr.]

10lines
due 10min
house rules
goodluck

[Ray Zr.]

check, due in ten minutes, lol.. hope u make it... blah blah blah, stupid 100 character shit, 96 99.

[Ray Zr.]

your life is far from steady, we all kno a win is wat ur chasin
^the bumpy road, is your only chance of ANY fuckin elevation
bitch lets be real, i record and i sale, 5 mic ratings, im off tha charts, die
cuz your only known as a Paramik... wen its ratings outta five
your probably fat as fuck, and pretty soon you'll be through
you'll no longer be hungry for the win... wen i put the stake in u
yall cant make para run, you dont make him scared enuff to move his feet
but i made Para dash.. by stompin his white ass onto the street
U can't fight with ur fists, cus when u punch ur dinging flat
Paramiks like a vampire... the only time he wins is by swinging bats

10. in i think 5min.

[Paramik]

Thanks For granting me the Extension
Oh and Please Make It 700 to vote Cos I don't want newbs voting.

[Ray Zr.]

lmfao... extension granted. i dont take weak wins, so it w/e, jus hurry up.. u got 3hour's, like u asked.. make it happen.

[Paramik]

Thanks bud I'm wrtie this one Quick I'm going out again lol
But I'll Make it. . v .

[Paramik]

Ok wtf at calling me out to battle, you are sore shit
saying ya makin a comeback...
........................sorry i think did that to your bitch
Must be gay son, asking my out 2 times to rock & battle
Cos ima just use Ray Zr. To shave my 5 o clock shadow
Ray’s the type of guy to act like an emcee, just fuckin retire
The way I’m flipping Mc like throwing rulers in the fire
Your such a Naturalist at shit, tis why I’m breaking ya best
But I’ll keep you close to Irwins… once I stingray in the chest
Have ya stuttering saying Para, Para all over, well see ya…
No Wait is all you can say when ya anorexic bitch leaves ya

[Antonio Banderas]

Ok wtf at calling me out to battle, you are sore shit
saying ya makin a comeback...
........................sorry i think did that to your bitch
-barely descent opener-

Must be gay son, asking my out 2 times to rock & battle
Cos ima just use Ray Zr. To shave my 5 o clock shadow
Descent, but the wording should have been better...creative though


Ray’s the type of guy to act like an emcee, just fuckin retire
The way I’m flipping Mc like throwing rulers in the fire
NO

Your such a Naturalist at shit, tis why I’m breaking ya best
But I’ll keep you close to Irwins… once I stingray in the chest
Nice


Have ya stuttering saying Para, Para all over, well see ya…
No Wait is all you can say when ya anorexic bitch leaves ya

Nah, wak closer
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your life is far from steady, we all kno a win is wat ur chasin
^the bumpy road, is your only chance of ANY fuckin elevation
barely descent, kinda played concepts

bitch lets be real, i record and i sale, 5 mic ratings, im off tha charts, die
cuz your only known as a Paramik... wen its ratings outta five
descent

your probably fat as fuck, and pretty soon you'll be through
you'll no longer be hungry for the win... wen i put the stake in u
descent

yall cant make para run, you dont make him scared enuff to move his feet
but i made Para dash.. by stompin his white ass onto the street
Nice

U can't fight with ur fists, cus when u punch ur dinging flat
Paramiks like a vampire... the only time he wins is by swinging bats
barlely descent

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Vote- Ray Zr. - I felt that Ray Zr. had better wordplay which attributes to a better usage of punchlines. This game him the edge in the battle. Paramik has a few descent lines, but the opener was kinda lame.

[Ray Zr.]

upping this shit......................... i will hit all links up, as i jus ran throught front lines, so shuld be getting votes on this battle pretty soon.

[Ray Zr.]

uppin............................................. .................................................. ..

[Mr.Vodka.]

your life is far from steady, we all kno a win is wat ur chasin
^the bumpy road, is your only chance of ANY fuckin elevation
meh...opener
bitch lets be real, i record and i sale, 5 mic ratings, im off tha charts, die
cuz your only known as a Paramik... wen its ratings outta five
lol...meh..
your probably fat as fuck, and pretty soon you'll be through
you'll no longer be hungry for the win... wen i put the stake in u
ok wordplay..
yall cant make para run, you dont make him scared enuff to move his feet
but i made Para dash.. by stompin his white ass onto the street
blah..
U can't fight with ur fists, cus when u punch ur dinging flat
Paramiks like a vampire... the only time he wins is by swinging bats
coo..closer..

vs.


Ok wtf at calling me out to battle, you are sore shit
saying ya makin a comeback...
........................sorry i think did that to your bitch
blah..opener
Must be gay son, asking my out 2 times to rock & battle
Cos ima just use Ray Zr. To shave my 5 o clock shadow
lol...NO..
Ray’s the type of guy to act like an emcee, just fuckin retire
The way I’m flipping Mc like throwing rulers in the fire
no
Your such a Naturalist at shit, tis why I’m breaking ya best
But I’ll keep you close to Irwins… once I stingray in the chest
cooo
Have ya stuttering saying Para, Para all over, well see ya…
No Wait is all you can say when ya anorexic bitch leaves ya
NO..bad closer

V-Ray zr.

[Ginger]

your life is far from steady, we all kno a win is wat ur chasin
^the bumpy road, is your only chance of ANY fuckin elevation
ehh, elevation punches sorta played but ok flip
bitch lets be real, i record and i sale, 5 mic ratings, im off tha charts, die
cuz your only known as a Paramik... wen its ratings outta five
meh
your probably fat as fuck, and pretty soon you'll be through
you'll no longer be hungry for the win... wen i put the stake in u
ok
yall cant make para run, you dont make him scared enuff to move his feet
but i made Para dash.. by stompin his white ass onto the street
not feelin
U can't fight with ur fists, cus when u punch ur dinging flat
Paramiks like a vampire... the only time he wins is by swinging bats
meh, not harsh really


2 OKs 2 MEHs
vs



Ok wtf at calling me out to battle, you are sore shit
saying ya makin a comeback...
........................sorry i think did that to your bitch
huh? nah not feelin this
Must be gay son, asking my out 2 times to rock & battle
Cos ima just use Ray Zr. To shave my 5 o clock shadow
ehh ok, i think his nameplay is played now but im not sure so i'll give it an ok barely tho
Ray’s the type of guy to act like an emcee, just fuckin retire
The way I’m flipping Mc like throwing rulers in the fire
no
Your such a Naturalist at shit, tis why I’m breaking ya best
But I’ll keep you close to Irwins… once I stingray in the chest
iight
Have ya stuttering saying Para, Para all over, well see ya…
No Wait is all you can say when ya anorexic bitch leaves ya
meh

2 OKs 1 MEH


V/Ray but barely, pretty close battle but ray came just a BIT better. Cool battle ...

[split...]

your life is far from steady, we all kno a win is wat ur chasin
^the bumpy road, is your only chance of ANY fuckin elevation
bitch lets be real, i record and i sale, 5 mic ratings, im off tha charts, die
cuz your only known as a Paramik... wen its ratings outta five

vs.

Must be gay son, asking my out 2 times to rock & battle
Cos ima just use Ray Zr. To shave my 5 o clock shadow
Ray’s the type of guy to act like an emcee, just fuckin retire
The way I’m flipping Mc like throwing rulers in the fire

overall this battle was ok..but i think ray took it with more and harder hittiin punches..para you had an ok verse here..but no real hard punches..no hate tho..ray won it IMO..

V.ray zr.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...es-344718.html
hit that

[3x]

your life is far from steady, we all kno a win is wat ur chasin
^the bumpy road, is your only chance of ANY fuckin elevation
meh preety played
bitch lets be real, i record and i sale, 5 mic ratings, im off tha charts, die
cuz your only known as a Paramik... wen its ratings outta five
meh
your probably fat as fuck, and pretty soon you'll be through
you'll no longer be hungry for the win... wen i put the stake in u
decent
yall cant make para run, you dont make him scared enuff to move his feet
but i made Para dash.. by stompin his white ass onto the street
naw
U can't fight with ur fists, cus when u punch ur dinging flat
Paramiks like a vampire... the only time he wins is by swinging bats
wordplay good punch meh

u had some good wordplay but ur punches were only decent so just work on comin harder but it was a decent verse none the less


Ok wtf at calling me out to battle, you are sore shit
saying ya makin a comeback...
........................sorry i think did that to your bitch
weak
Must be gay son, asking my out 2 times to rock & battle
Cos ima just use Ray Zr. To shave my 5 o clock shadow
weak
Ray’s the type of guy to act like an emcee, just fuckin retire
The way I’m flipping Mc like throwing rulers in the fire
weak
Your such a Naturalist at shit, tis why I’m breaking ya best
But I’ll keep you close to Irwins… once I stingray in the chest
meh
Have ya stuttering saying Para, Para all over, well see ya…
No Wait is all you can say when ya anorexic bitch leaves ya
meh

this wasnt that good of a verse it had alot of weak punches and it didnt rhyme to great (personal opinion i dont think shadow and battle rhyme)

v/ray zr for better punches and word play

[Ray Zr.]

upping............................................ .................................................. ...