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    *****DA THUG'S MIND******mUST SEE

    CANDIDATEScANDIdATEsCANDIDATES

    if YOU hard this you ....if you real :scared: ....DIS YOU......if dont mutha fuckin CARE.....well mutha fucka dis you too!!!!!!...

    THUGS LETS TELL EM LIKE DIS HERE...

    THIS RAP JUST LIKE OIL SHEEN
    THIS SHIT SHINES HOLMES!
    sTRIGHT FROM DA GUT PUNCHIN THROUGH LINES HOLMES
    JUST TO DAMN HYPED UP
    LIKE PRIEST hOLMES
    IM ON SOME LINEMAN SHIT
    WE BLOCK YA ATTEMPS LONGS

    IM DONTE HALL RUNNIN (YUP)
    WITH A DEADLY TORCH
    THATS A ANTIQUE TOMMY GUN
    MADE SWISS IMPORTS-- (FOReIGN)
    THIS DATE STUNNER HERE-IS STRAIGHT THROUGH BREAD
    MAKE CAKES, ROLL DOUGH
    YALL JUST MARITTA BREAD (SOFT)
    OR A LIL' DEBBIE
    PROBABLY LIL BOW WOOW (ho)
    I 'LL TRAP YOU IN MY LIL' WEBBIE
    THEN SLICE OFF YA LIPS, AWWWWW! (DAMN)
    SPIN YA WIT SOME DUCTAPE
    COVER YA EYES UP
    NOW YOU'S A BLIND DATE DUCK- "SURPRISE" - WHAT DA FUCK!
    MABYE I'LL ELIMINATE CHA'
    SHOULD I TERMINATE CHA' ? ( T-2)
    BUT NIGGA YOU ONLY A SMALL SECT
    I'LL JUST EXTERMINATE CHA'--

    i CAUSE RAIDS NIGGAAAA
    GOT THESE PEST CONTROLLED
    IM DA PET CONTROL
    I USE NO REMOTE CONTROLS-
    THEY SAY IM DA RING LEADER
    SAID I HAD THA HEATERS (gunz)
    I TOLD DEM COLD NIGGAS WAS AROUND
    TRYING HARD TO FREEZE US-
    IM NOT FUCKIN NICE
    GEMMIE YA CHAINS AND ICE
    FEEL LIKE DE-BO DOIN THIS SHIT
    BUT I'LL STEAL YA LIFE-
    JUST DONT GIVE A FUCK
    KNOCK OUT ALL YA TEEFES
    NOW YA GUMMY BEAR
    LEAVE YA REECES TO PIECES--
    THE CANDIDATES IS IN DA GAME
    LIKE MANOPOLY PIECES
    YEA YOU KNOW OUR TOKENS DA CASH
    WE STICK TO IT LIKE LEECHES
    so remember dat
    nigga we chase 1's
    every ben frank counts
    dont make us pull da gunS
    shiT!
    fee--die--fo our change, we'LL make you fum-ble son


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    this didnt really rhyme. next time try to add better flow to it and actually have rhymes to it. it rhymed at no point, and honestly for this topic, more shit would've been added to make it more interesting. your vocab was down-hill and you didnt show emotion in any way rather it wa sbad, sad, or happy.. so improve and elevate on most of your skillz to show a better quality of work on your OM's. and you will get more feed back next time
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