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Thread: Divine Shine

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    Divine Shine

    Yo this is J_Doe BOut to let chall see my Freestyle/Hook that iam creating n shit...LOYALTY FOREVER TO LOST SOULS...BIG UP TO ALL MY NIGGAS AND LEAVE HONEST COMMENTS>>>THANKZ NIGGAS...
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    Verse 1
    I Get by in Life Pickin Random Shit that makes sense
    Whether a butcher knife,or bricks jumpin Barb-Wire Fence
    I Listen to my Heart and for that is What I Live For
    Sitting Patient in the Game Hopin I Can stop bein poor
    Makin Moneys hard, cuz all i try is only Legal
    I open up my heart and spread my arms like iam an Eagle
    Stayin Tense makes sense with Evil in this life-Time
    Staying strong to live Long is how iam gonna get those dimes
    Hopin for a better-day, strugglin just to stop my crimes
    Its Obvious and blatent i rely on my "DIvIne Shine"

    Hook
    People said i never had it, they couldnt even trust in me
    Its funny when ur family is the one lookin down on me
    I gotta give it my all, i have a chance to make history
    Rely on my DIvIne Shine to find a way to just succeed

    Just Like The Apostles were, Profits and the pety theives
    Good And Bad control our lives, its so hard when peepz are naive
    Hopin that i make it sum how, soon the world will be mines
    Goin Through Obstacles day by day, prayin on my DIvIne Shine

    Critics Never Led The way, cashin on a big pay-day
    Hatin fuckers tryin win, but bad guys cant lead the way
    So what does it take to get it out, my words just aint spittin out
    So much i have to say, so wat is hesitation all about
    Iam tryin not to snap out, stay "Heatin Dogz" like Sour Krout
    I know bein straight is all i got, the 9 will leak ur spirit out
    Crimson lights glare and prepare the morbid sky
    Anyday, Anyway One or Two Men May die...
    But I hold on and look, Pray for better times to get mine
    I rely Souly on my determination for DIvIne Shine

    Hook2
    Since My Soul is under attack, I cant Turn My back
    My rhymes are bussin headz, spittin nice is wat i dont lack
    Most these peepz in these streetz are merk'd when dey jack'd
    So i hold close to my dough, and count on my Many Stacks
    As Long As there is a GOD...i gotta face the facts
    Iam Young, and Black...but the ODDS make my pockets fat

    Just Like The Apostles were, Profits and the pety theives
    Good And Bad control our lives, its so hard when peepz are naive
    Hopin that i make it sum how, soon the world will be mines
    Goin Through Obstacles day by day, prayin on my DIvIne Shine
    Heaven's Guardians Of True Hip-Hop

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    wow that was long i liked the rhymes in that piece

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