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This is a verse i done a while back and thinking about doing some more for it.
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He’s a lonely guy, sixteen with a cold glare,
A bold stare, told fair to leave but go where,
No care for life, left wit a black bag for a sack of clothes,
And a backpack with a strapped hat and half a roach,
Laughed at by most, people call him a drifter,
No job, just a caravan and hauled from every picture,
Preys to lord to stop this stricture, and change the purpose to his birth,
Thinking how much pain he’s suffered since he was surfaced on this earth,
The first words he blurts in a word search is this hurts,
Ripped shirts, torn clothes and a walkman’s all he posses,
A pen that he blesses as he writes between the lines,
Damp rhymes books a stress ball as he kicks and screams in rhymes,
Writing’s what he leans on when he finds,
Time to unwind and let the ink touch paper,
His heart flows through his pen, his mind elevates and thinks greater,
He blinks and makes the, tears fall, reveals his pain and misery,
Hundred percent in every word coz in this game nothings given free,
Aint no easy delivery, to fame he gota make it on his own,
No-ones there to carry him incase he gives up breaks or folds,
So he keeps his eyes on the prize seeing himself one day take the gold.
What you guys think, do u reckon i should keep going coz' i mite turn it into audio.
Feedback plz
Peace
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