Bed Time Story

[Abi]

Ok little girls and boys
I got a bed time story about these little hoes
They like 12 years old
Losin their virginity to a 20 sometin year old
They be sucking dick
Gettin Fucked in the ass and doin freaky shit
So you look at her and she a hottie with a nice body
Tits like jolie Bootie like j. lo
She must have a personal trainer or sometin, (oh no!!!!!)
Got that tummy from suckin cock
Got that ass from being one too many times around the block
And she got the tits from her momma
Got hooked on coke from her dada
Couple years later now she a cokehead
Skinny as hell
Lost that botey and the tits as well
Got AIDS and HIV for shootin up with her best friend lil D
And you start to remember when she was a little girl
She used to run around wearing fake pearls
Wanted to be a pilot to see the whole world
But now at 16 she makes you wanna hurl
Sorry little boys and girl
Story's over
"Bitch be a good girl and bend over"
PEACE ---- hahahah


Sorry i don't have time right now to get 2 of those commentary things
I will have them by tommorow by this time thanks for understanding

[MISTA GRIM]

it was aight but it didn't really flow that well. but it's kool. keep droppin

[wyte boy$]

hell no........work on ur structure ur lines to short and wordplay was weak as hell use more complex rhymes........u need to elevate 4 real....

and drop 2 links ....

[Ether Spitter]

i wasnt feelin ya piece whatsoever....but you speakin truth...elevate the flow and wordplay....

igido