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    "Twin Narrators"


    Twin Narrators


    *One story told by two diffirent perspectives*


    *Narrator 1: Jesus Christ*
    This kid was quite nice, Even though he sinned all his life
    So he spent all his nights, Tryin to repente back to Christ
    Slighty fixin his ties, By whispering cries that drift into sky
    His wisdom was blind, So diminished his vision was slight
    So sick of his eyes, he despised to even print out the light
    This kid was twisted inside, Till he realized he had a heart
    Right then the passion sparked,...Right passed his toughts
    Passive parts, His massive props, had over lapse the dark
    To bring happy thoughts, Then gradually, sadden brought
    Madness arts that damaged lots, Damn, what a tragic loss
    Another rapper gone, vanished,captured by his own lyrics
    Shattered his own spirit, what kinda disasterous soul is this
    When every pastor an pope fears it?, But all that changed
    Becuase one day he called my name,...At the start of pray
    So I paused and wait, And listen as his thoughts explained
    His heart was pained, Harmed and slayed, Dark displayed
    It fell apart in days, So when it stopped he start complaints
    Stall, then starts to talk with God in vein, a promise breaks
    He contemplates, then stops the breaks like a parkin space
    He starts to stray, He's lost his ways,.....So he walks away



    *Narrator 2: The Devil*
    Straight from the bottomless pit, Birthed from a army of six
    Spawned a problem within, A dark consceince that sinned
    He promised hes sick, So twisted he'd spit an vomit on kids
    He's like a glitch in a document print, Makin the copier shift
    Harnesting the darkest of sins, This kid is obviously a prick
    Everyone wishing he'd prolly just quit, but his pain is ageless
    Contained an sacred, His brain is basically based on hatred
    If he keeps pacing his frame he'd break it, his face is greyish
    He's just another face thats nameless, This lame's just basic
    His rage is caged in, It's outragous, how hes stays insane an
    Slaved to hatred, He paints the pages, that'll end his chapter
    So he trys to repente to pastors, clearin the sins he raptured
    But It just doesn't happen, As quick as he did the bad work
    So now hes pissed an badgured, Wishin he did it backwards
    But hes to bussy dishin bad words, Constantly dissin rappers
    Always from distant platforms, Mixtures of evil hurt him badly
    Diffirent of people murked em nasty, he derserv'd the act see
    Actually worse then that heat,... But now his words are fancy
    Hes worth the happy, So he got baptise on a church's balcony




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    Good Piece....But shut up.
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    LMAO, Say something stupid again, And I'll murk you,

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    Stfu...It was weak for you.

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    This is text LMAO you fuckin fag, LMAo learn what you're talkin about before you open your mouth. Each one of those verses in my peace easily outshinned ya whole topical.

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