pictures paint the past

[djb]

Elegance shouts with illuminance portraying colors
brush strokes provoke me to ever so eerily wonder
a serene scene as pictures paint me and my brothers
green tree’s dim the dusty road of forebode mutters
as a carriage crawls through what are now suburbs
elegance shouts with illuminance portraying colors
hands woven tight I drift back into sight of mother
take her place generations before I experience exist
a serene scene as pictures paint me and my brothers
a beauty unknown now because Im often shuddered
to see now what I have never found leaves me awed
Elegance shouts with illuminance portraying colors
beginning to relate to simplicity in past years I utter
discovering you allowed me to finally find myself
a serene scene as pictures paint me and my brothers
now my dream ends and im not speaking to others
through the present I found your past in this picture
Elegance shouts with illuminance portraying colors
a serene scene as pictures paint me and my brothers

[xPirat3x]

that was dope man good job.

[Johnny 6-feet]

i liked the structure of this,espeically since i haven't slept for a long time now it made me feel like i was stuck in a time loop, lol. good to see you branching out man. i dug the concept,the vocab was just a little too strong for my liking but the good points of this piece far outweigh that.

keep posting, good job.