BreakDown
Taser
IP: DF61 658E
Son you garbage, we got lie detectors, man we know ur fake.
Coz you amount to more ass than girls at a concert for jstin timberlake.
your whack raps, dawg your whole shit prolly gunna sound like a chorus,
gunna repeat he flow, questioning me like a tourist,
you catz is to boring to me, lets state the facts, you need a dictionary..
to post ya raps but you seem to have forgot the use of a Cemetery..
I bury the lies, along with you cries cuz nigga this is a lyrical avalanche..
so why you crosssing my path, I over do shit like using a laser to kill ants..
so lets be honest, you should pay homage so nigga wheres the money
You suppose to be a thug "gecko" , more like a clown, coz nigga ya funny..
^This verse was pretty decent. I like the punchline attempts..pretty funny shit as well, Good flow and consistency was pretty good.
S. Gecko
This shit a joke, it’s a fact the this guy must be freebasin/
Take a toke, ya get no reputation wat the fuck you be tasin?/
Been a member for a day you already choked, heck man/
33 posts in an hour? Post count don’t get you respect man/
only steers and queers come outta texas, shit/
everybody on this site know what category you fit/
the only beats u got is your keyboard tapping, am I makin you angry/
you’d probably give your own arm to hear another man rapping/
ya last battle young star sonned you cuz your flow was garbage/
ya verse retarded, seth left you sittin there wishin that you didn’t start it/
^eHH....AIGHT so-so verse. I like the attempt though. Nice attemptin on punches, i saw a few. I can tell ya a newb though, just need to elevate a lil bit more..Basic's is what you need...Jus ask for help...ill help as well if you want..
Overall: Taser
Reason: Basically Taser had this wit more effective punches on his belt...Good verse from both, and they both have potential, just need to elevate a lil bit more and be creative.,..
RTF in my sig...1
