$pitacular (2-0) vs. God (2-0)

[Se7eN]

My Opinion of this battle...............


Punches and Personals-God, cause I saw a verse by $pit that was a lil weaker and not as had hitting as God's shit......Both were nice hard hitting punches juss one was better of course.......

Structure and Flow-Tie, both were easy to read and had really nice structure...............

Vocabulary and Wordplay-God for wordplay but $pit took vocabulary........

Conclusion-God came a lil harder in my opinion.......Than $pit did and it was a really good battle, but personals and punches win battles really no matter what, God took these so....................


Vote/God

[Laureate]

$pit definitly came more consistent than God...god came played with lines at $pit that have been done before. God had a nice line with the "SPit on the street", but $pit just outclassed him in this battle

Vote=$pit

[Icarus]

Some say my words are harsh, but I ain't afraid of this nigga
Only time $pit will own me is when he buys my Action figure
nice concept
Kid talked quite a lot, but I ain't blame him when he boasted
Cuz he was voted top 5 textcee!.... when $pitacular posted
blah
See him squirm? goal was to kick his ass, and damn, I scored
I bring more cent-sational rhymes than $pit can ever afford
used before
I can punch at ya all Mourning, cause God is bringin' the heat
When this is over, a $pit'll just be another spot on the street
eh......
Claim vet status? Every vet $hits on ya, ur a fuckin' disgrace
Every time he climbs the ladder I leave a footprint on his face
coo
Yo, can't count how much a vet has handed this bitch a lickin'
But even that bullshit ain't ass bad ass $pit's latest butt-kickin'
blah.. i never click links
Dancin' circles around him with votes, & I ain't find my groove
I guess I'll nut on this pussy, cause I'm about to bust a move
heard a variation of this before
Yo, I think ur the worst Elite, but I may slightly underestimate
Leave em laid out on the table cuz I got too much on my plate
coulda been worded better
On the top of his game, still spittin' shit, but ya can't fake shit
$pit's top of the league.... When the rest are lost in the Matrix
didn't get it
So in closing, $pit, stay away from the big dawgs, ur just a runt
I outfoxed ur ass from the beginning... and I ain't start the hunt
coo

what's a day matter, when you know tomorrow's the truth
& the only God I bow to.... always swallows my puke
is there a toilet named god
got em followin suit.... poundin his head like a drummer
God sticks to my nuts... more than my thighs in the summer
haha
I'm risin, the gunner.... poke God, make em holier & softin
I told him not to give me any lip, & this pussy still offer'n....
coo
in the name of the father'n.... & the son, I ignore em
holy ghost = his worship of the vet that writes for em
weak
fuckin bore I'm..... really just here to key sloppy shit
fag tried to sell me short, but I didn't buy his cockiness....
tight
shiiiiit..... I put more murder ink on God than Irv Gotti
I didn't come to cast doubts, just most of the nerd's body....
nice
kid acts snotty.... so I hit em with a clean X
crossed out, tossed out the league till weak's end
eh...filler 2 me
can't hide it, I'm peak-in... while God's always runnin mouth
he stands by the window, & we're gonna have a falling out
coo wordplay here, not a hard punch tho
called him out... & in the midst of the confusion
God took a leap of faith, n' jumped to his conclusion....
jumped to conclusion is played nowaydays
didn't just bruise em..... left God in a broken state
& stabbed his eye a few, since he put on his poker face
coo wordplay, alrite closer[B]

Pretty good battle, nice wordplay nothing overly witty tho, I'm voting for Spit because he was more consistent in my opinion. God seemed to have to stretch for his punches in terms of going out of the normal.

Vote : Spit

I gave y'all a detailed breakdown, please check out my battle against Ef, a lil down the page

Edit: Cool man, I didn't get the matrix joke... the link thing was a new idea, but creating links makes it feel like less of rap battle and more of some kinda internet treasure hunt so I just ignore em mostly. My vote's still 4 Spit tho.

[God.]

I respect your vote, but seriously, if you don't understand something, PM me or IM me.

The link was a twist, cuz I linked to to this battle... Whateva about that.

On the second to last line, I meant that he's at the top of his game and still drops trash... Only time he'll be best of the league is when the resto of us are lost in The Matrix... Due to his sig and avatar.

If that doesn't change the outcome of ur vote, than cool, I just wanted you to understand my verse.

[SmokaJoka]

$pit. wins, closed.

$pitacular (3-0)
God (2-1)