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In we are going twenty baby...
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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Last edited by Blood Drenched Tampon; August 4th, 2004 at 11:27 AM
Quill....
Girl needs an update, no wonder she has these whack shows
since Quills wrote beautiful words..sure..around 200 years ago
frustrated can't get a lay man we knew something wasn't right
when she could easily outshine Jay speaking about hard knock life
but I see where the anger comes from,orphanage had to be a shocker
I mean the creature looks so bad even Mother Nature didn't adopt her
& she asked for this..we can go dollar for dollar, pound for pound
or I can get $pit in here to own your ass....a third fucken round
dumb attention whore..me&you are so different when compared
my style is street...while all you know are those dark thoroughfares
& damn seventeen yearolds in Maryland get jobs,ain't hard to tell
says she travels for business but always ends up in the same motel
plus text=bad idea since a)your script don't stick like unadhesive strips
b)your record is looking like the Berlin wall,everyone's got a piece of it
fuck femcees actin wild..I'm sure even Hottie wouldn't want to be ya
'cause this fat whore wants to rap..but doesn't have the slimest idea
&LMAO@me being on YOUR clit...thats some wrong shit you're pilin
I'm not the one actin like a nostalgic tourist,always sittin on the same Island
its over Action, you've had your shot at fame..no question or doubt
was right behind me on the steps to success...until her mop dried out
bottoms up.
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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Tsk. You should of took more time.
Fuck you, kids brave and & got his Custom Title to honor me
Look under the Kap, I'm the winner, like Soda Companies
Get on the bandwagon, kid didn't step up to this battle
& it's "Follow in my footsteps", not live in $pitaculars shadow
He's in Merk Squad now..you'll prevail? Stop it..
Cuz I'll hang Kap like Jesus & say he was nail polished
Whore, Av, Slut, Hottie, still can't rock with the bitch
Said push come to shove & Kap fell off the bridge
ShockValue kid, had a spark for days & hours then nothing
Cuz Kap could be a TV set & still not have a Power button
Think before you speak, embarssing me is a Heist
& ur wording gets more gross..than the Passion Of Christ!
Advice: Don't piss me off. Kids torn but loyal..
I said spread Knowledge, so he tries to date Barnes & Noble
8-1 in FrontLines, pitiful, Kap you're just miserable
Plagued with wackness..this kid got KO'ed by sdizzle
I've seen ya verses, you're a line flipper, this gift shops
& who wants to walk in your shoes, if the Flip Flops..
I'm dope, but you're known, & i'll end with something
Kap will be in the next Mag............
....as one of my top ten punches.
Bitch. No one from Quotables Vote.
the lines that caught my attention were:
Kaptitolins:
& she asked for this..we can go dollar for dollar, pound for pound
or I can get $pit in here to own your ass....a third fucken round
they only battled once, dope but fake.
& damn seventeen yearolds in Maryland get jobs,ain't hard to tell
says she travels for business but always ends up in the same motel
not bad there, good job.
its over Action, you've had your shot at fame..no question or doubt
was right behind me on the steps to success...until her mop dried out
this was your nicest line.
All in all a pretty lack luster verse.
Quill:
Fuck you, kids brave and & got his Custom Title to honor me
Look under the Kap, I'm the winner, like Soda Companies
nice name wordplay.
Get on the bandwagon, kid didn't step up to this battle
& it's "Follow in my footsteps", not live in $pitaculars shadow
kinda feeding but was a nice personal
-1 in FrontLines, pitiful, Kap you're just miserable
Plagued with wackness..this kid got KO'ed by sdizzle
that's just plain fuckin funny.
I'm dope, but you're known, & i'll end with something
Kap will be in the next Mag............
....as one of my top ten punches.
best line of the battle hands down.
vote: Quill, more stand out lines.
^Actually, they battled twice.
Really nice battle, guys and girls!
kapitolins: Came real good this time, with some strong metas, punches, and personals. I thought that he coulda focused a little more on her instead of making metas. It was a great verse, and you'll do well if you keep your verses up to this level.
Quill: Great verse here from you as well. I liked the punches, personals, everything was more or less on point. I felt you needed a little more nameplay, but that didn't hinder you much. Your closer was what pulled you thru, but only slightly.
By a quarter of an inch...
Vote: Quill
yes I just saw that, thank's for telling me. You have greatly changed my entire life by that piece of information. Truely you are God.
LOL... I know.
Stop clogging my thread ladies and gents. And yes, we battled twice, but he beat me once. That other battle isn't done, so you're both wrong. = ]. Thanks. 2-0.
much improved Kap, much improved.... still need to work on some stuff
I'll give a line by line to help elevate
Girl needs an update, no wonder she has these whack shows
since Quills wrote beautiful words..sure..around 200 years ago
worded weak. Ok concept, but coulda seen it comin from a mile out
frustrated can't get a lay man we knew something wasn't right
when she could easily outshine Jay speaking about hard knock life
set up was run-on, needed a comma... punch was a poor attempt.
but I see where the anger comes from,orphanage had to be a shocker
I mean the creature looks so bad even Mother Nature didn't adopt her
mother nature = played.
& she asked for this..we can go dollar for dollar, pound for pound
or I can get $pit in here to own your ass....a third fucken round
*smiles* shouldn't lean on me for a punch, but I ain't hatin...
dumb attention whore..me&you are so different when compared
my style is street...while all you know are those dark thoroughfares
decent but didn't hit that hard. come better
& damn seventeen yearolds in Maryland get jobs,ain't hard to tell
says she travels for business but always ends up in the same motel
best punch so far
plus text=bad idea since a)your script don't stick like unadhesive strips
b)your record is looking like the Berlin wall,everyone's got a piece of it
set up was WACK, but the punch was dope.
fuck femcees actin wild..I'm sure even Hottie wouldn't want to be ya
'cause this fat whore wants to rap..but doesn't have the slimest idea
eh... I woulda felt somethin about 'faintest idea' and passing out, but this... eh
&LMAO@me being on YOUR clit...thats some wrong shit you're pilin
I'm not the one actin like a nostalgic tourist,always sittin on the same Island
weak. falling off toward the end here...
its over Action, you've had your shot at fame..no question or doubt
was right behind me on the steps to success...until her mop dried out
decent, but more for FL not closer in LLL Jr.
Keep at it. You're headed in the right direction now, your concepts and vocab are getting better. Work on your wording and set ups, if you arrange that better you'll hit much harder. Decent drop, but you can do much better
Quill
Fuck you, kids brave and & got his Custom Title to honor me
Look under the Kap, I'm the winner, like Soda Companies
loved this... but how are you under Kap and winning? sounds like he's on top...
Get on the bandwagon, kid didn't step up to this battle
& it's "Follow in my footsteps", not live in $pitaculars shadow
niiice. would of said you fed off his verse, but he does kind of do that anyway lol
He's in Merk Squad now..you'll prevail? Stop it..
Cuz I'll hang Kap like Jesus & say he was nail polished
nice, but should have been worded better. still liked it
Whore, Av, Slut, Hottie, still can't rock with the bitch
Said push come to shove & Kap fell off the bridge
concept is old, but this was a decent flip.
ShockValue kid, had a spark for days & hours then nothing
Cuz Kap could be a TV set & still not have a Power button
eh... weak
Think before you speak, embarssing me is a Heist
& ur wording gets more gross..than the Passion Of Christ!
Passion punches = played, but ok...
Advice: Don't piss me off. Kids torn but loyal..
I said spread Knowledge, so he tries to date Barnes & Noble
funny. laughed here.
8-1 in FrontLines, pitiful, Kap you're just miserable
Plagued with wackness..this kid got KO'ed by sdizzle
sdizzle punches = played
I've seen ya verses, you're a line flipper, this gift shops
& who wants to walk in your shoes, if the Flip Flops..
best punch of battle here
I'm dope, but you're known, & i'll end with something
Kap will be in the next Mag............
....as one of my top ten punches.
eh... wasn't feelin it, too predictable
overall I have to say Quill took it with a few better lines. Kap, you could have won if you had two more decent punches and dropped your two worst lines. Quill looks like you decided to drop bare minimum just to take the win, didn't really stomp him. decent battle, entertaining at least. pz
vote - Quill
Vote Quill. More quotable lines from here such as...
Fuck you, kids brave and & got his Custom Title to honor me
Look under the Kap, I'm the winner, like Soda Companies
Get on the bandwagon, kid didn't step up to this battle
& it's "Follow in my footsteps", not live in $pitaculars shadow
I'm dope, but you're known, & i'll end with something
Kap will be in the next Mag............
....as one of my top ten punches.
As for kap i liked..
but I see where the anger comes from,orphanage had to be a shocker
I mean the creature looks so bad even Mother Nature didn't adopt her
& she asked for this..we can go dollar for dollar, pound for pound
or I can get $pit in here to own your ass....a third fucken round
Quill came better with wit & hardness.
Depthz.
Good battle. Quill obviously took this since her punches hit much harder. Kap used a few played concepts, and the other punches were just average... or they sucked.
That is all.
V/Quill
Pz
Quill got this..
Nice li9nes from both but Quill just killed it with some of these lines..
Fuck you, kids brave and & got his Custom Title to honor me
Look under the Kap, I'm the winner, like Soda Companies
Get on the bandwagon, kid didn't step up to this battle
& it's "Follow in my footsteps", not live in $pitaculars shadow
I'm dope, but you're known, & i'll end with something
Kap will be in the next Mag............
....as one of my top ten punches.
Those were dopeness yo.
Kap came ok but didnt have the level of Entensity thast Quill had.
I liked these.
Girl needs an update, no wonder she has these whack shows
since Quills wrote beautiful words..sure..around 200 years ago
& damn seventeen yearolds in Maryland get jobs,ain't hard to tell
says she travels for business but always ends up in the same motel
Quill had more notables..
V/Quill
Ok.
kapitolins:
Your verse was par..Look like you
did rush it in my opinion...
" damn seventeen yearolds in Maryland get jobs,ain't hard to tell
says she travels for business but always ends up in the same motel"
^ Was somewhat your strongest punch..perosnal..
Flow was ok structure was good, but you lacked...
Hard hitting punches..
Quill:
"Get on the bandwagon, kid didn't step up to this battle
& it's "Follow in my footsteps", not live in $pitaculars shadow"
^ Funny strongest punch to me...
"Advice: Don't piss me off. Kids torn but loyal..
I said spread Knowledge, so he tries to date Barnes & Noble"
^ Nice concept punch...
Just those two quoteables alone took this..
Quill also had nice structure and better flow
to me.....
v/Quill due to better punches consistent as well...
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