aight. . .
10 lines
no recycling
drop due 30 mins after check in
you drop first . . .
remember 2 check in
Hansom Harry
sabotage
aight. . .
10 lines
no recycling
drop due 30 mins after check in
you drop first . . .
remember 2 check in
check in.....we droppin 30 from now, who cares who goes first............
Harry
post soon
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=131039
(click on pic)
I flatten whores on battle boards N leave their faces bloody,
While Sabotage suks on a mike. .like a Jackson bed time buddy.
Your dumb and DONE dunnie. . .^only 2 lines and I bitched yu,
Coz u don’t know how to punch. . .like kids who do Jiu Jitsu.
The title bitch fits you, accept it and know your place,
But ill admit you look sik . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .with all that grease up on your face.
. . . . . I would taste that chik ur next to. . .coz that hoe got fitness,
But tell her to get some tips from ur eyebrows-when it comes to thickness.
So fukka curtain shirt wearing virgin, im the best respect it,
Its like im from the Eating Disorder foundation…the way I deal with anorexic’s.
SKINNY BITCH!
Harry
lol that was a dope drop.... i enjoyed reading that.. ima have 2 put you 2 sleep now...
checkin in. . .
In your public profile it says in your bio that your attractive, witty, and fun
who really wants to be friends with some1 whos unactive, shitty, and dumb?
You shouldn't talk about peoples pictures when you aint got one yourself
cuz even your own family don't frame your pics, they put'em low on the shelf
Sit da fuk down homey, nobody wants to read the mans verse from austria
play your role as the biggest bitch on the entire planet along wit ya posse bra
Your occupation says you a full time part timer. you must not have a life
cause you spend your time pumpin' up your chest and not lookin 4 a wife
Nobody would wanna wed you dawg not even retarded homosexual misfits
Its too apparent that when the talented and skilled boat left dock u missed it
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Harry
Both were good but Hansom Harry came a bit harder his punches were good from the start to the finish. He also had better vocab and better wordplay. This line was sick and set the tone for the whole battle--
I flatten whores on battle boards N leave their faces bloody,
While Sabotage suks on a mike. .like a Jackson bed time buddy
my vote goes to Hansom Harry
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Harry
Harry: structure: 4/10
enjoyed: 5/10
punches: 4/10
overall 5/10
Sabotage: overall 3/10
structures: 3/10
flow: 3/10
punches: 4/10
vote: harry
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Harry
This was an interestin battle.
Harry-
U had personals....wit the pic an all.........could have been little more creative some were played.but u had betta punces.
Sab-
1st Streeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetched lines...lol Yo verse was simple and played....really from austria....and posse bra wtf??????..lol Work on punches....
V/: H
I cant vote on poll yet. But i did this anywayz
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Harry
upping . . . .
I think Sab took this by hitting nice and personally, despite not having a pic to work off of.
Structure, he didn't take, he came stretched and messy.
But the content was much sharper and directed better.
First off, HH opened with a "MJ/little kids" line. Played to death and whack even in it's delivery.
Second bar...WTF? Some of the best fighters in the world (Royce Gracie = Legend) are skilled in Jiu Jitsu...so...huh?
Third was ok, but eh, you coulda wordplayed that "grease" line alot better...
So what, you fuckin that bitch? Pussy's prolly a dried up place...
But don't worry, kid, you got lube, just use the grease off ya face!
Something like that woulda been better than your simple statement.
Fourth bar was again, eh, misdirected, not at him, but at the fine bitch and all you could say was, what? She's not fat...and...her eyebrows? They look fine to me.
Nice wordplay on the last bar (and on the shirt diss), but still, she's hot, I don't get the skinny diss.
Sab hadda few bad concepts...(retard homo misfits...WTF?)
But despite being stretched, his shit was directed and the personals rang truer than HH's personals.
Shorten ya lines, you have to.
And don't throw insult words just to say something (retard, homo, misfit)...
Have em be part of the diss, use some more wordplay.
Alot of your stuff lacked finesse, you're coming too straight ahead.
Wordplay and wit, dude.
But your direction and steadiness, I think, gave you this battle by justa bit.
Peace
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