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  1. June 1st, 2004, 03:37 PM #1
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    "Two faced"

    Two faced


    Inner struggles to find a clue, one masked identity
    One person, one mind, two sides of this sanity
    Life has landed me, a dilemma of my description
    Health officials have not one prescribed prescription
    This a simple case of one life's born addiction...
    Or a forlorning of God's last and final prediction

    Two eyes, two hands, two legs, and one face
    Hidden face beneath race, linked and laced
    Time and space, other cases of my disgrace?
    Make haste to find answers, satisfy mind's taste
    But is it a waste, if life's obscurities stay true...
    And I base life, on being two, like me and you

    Two ways, two angles, one direction of the flow
    Choose which way to go, but mind's at cross roads
    Interweiving and mixing of this and that ideas
    Lead us, or just me, one person, you can't see us
    Red and green lights, but I'm stuck at caution...
    A blockage of two sides, but couldn't help flossin'

    Two days, two years, two tears, and one life
    Depression sets in and one must live this strife
    One person, one mind, imperfection of one line
    Two sides, two basic numbers, should be fine?
    Line- one's anxious feelings can't ever surpass
    Truth be told... or is it a dream and not a fact
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  2. June 1st, 2004, 03:39 PM #2
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    Chrit - Prom Night Problems
    Miss_Jess- Infatuated by love

    ..and some others....
    I'm still reading others as well
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  3. June 1st, 2004, 07:38 PM #3
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  4. June 1st, 2004, 11:39 PM #4
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    feedback plz....
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  5. June 2nd, 2004, 07:16 AM #5
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    Great piece, loved the way you used tha numbers (like this one: Two days, two years, two tears, and one life ) Not an easy piece to capture (my opinion, but might be caused by my lacking English lol) But as i read it few times, i got what you were sayin', felt your emotion. Flow, vocab, structure,...they all worked for me!

    Very nice....

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  6. June 2nd, 2004, 03:01 PM #6
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    thanks alot, glad u enjoyed.
    more?
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  7. June 3rd, 2004, 01:32 AM #7
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    damn, never been slept on this bad....

    leave a link, and I WILL read your work, all these views and no feedback.
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  8. June 4th, 2004, 12:00 PM #8
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  9. June 4th, 2004, 12:25 PM #9
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    I actually liked this piece.
    Seriously, something about the flow that got me hooked.
    Interesting to say the least. I liked the first 6 lines the best.
    Its always good to have a good start to the piece to get the readers interested.
    Keep it up!
    Check out my, 'Diamonds Are Forever.' piece, in my sig, thanks.
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  10. June 4th, 2004, 11:43 PM #10
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    thanks freeman.
    up again.
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  11. June 5th, 2004, 12:08 AM #11
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    nice and i thought you were just a text battler.. lol
    nice imagrey here.. i reall yliked this the flow was real good..
    and it kept me reading.. not a lot of pieces draw my attention
    like yours did.. multis wer nice.. and the vocab was good
    and i think this was a real great piece
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  12. June 5th, 2004, 12:47 AM #12
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    real deep piece dawg...felt it took me two times to fully comprehend...
    good vocab...really feelin da concept of twosides to things...
    shoulda made it longer thought..and u right this shouldnt be slept on so bad..
    hit my OM up called Illtheories
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  14. June 5th, 2004, 01:07 PM #14
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    I'm new to RB so you can take what I say with a grain of salt, but I like what I read. Good flow, you really carry the reader from cynical to sombre. Starts off a little stronger than finish though.

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  15. June 6th, 2004, 01:53 AM #15
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    love the feedback, but I'm not getting much!
    I accept any and all....

    thanks cali. up again.
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