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    An outsider's view on da U.S of A

    My link:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124091



    Yo I don't mean no disrespect or ofence with this dop..just expressin' my point of view..if u don't agree that's cool..but there's no hate here..just what i feel....



    An outsider's view on da U.S of A,
    Don't expect Bush to do what i say,
    When he ignores his own voters and does it own his way,
    God knows his focus,where his purpose lay.

    Body bags coming from eye-raq just as i rap,
    It would all be justified except for the slight fact,
    That there no weapons there,but they don't buy that,
    Maybe it's in Saddam's ass,did you try that?
    Back when the soviets landed in Afghanistan,
    You hired Laden to put your flag in the sand,
    Battle over,he aked for his share of land,
    You dissed him,and he framed a new battle plan.
    Kept hitting with little blows here and there,
    But it wasn't shitting you,you just did not care,
    So he decided to step up to the dare,
    Declared to the world,better be beware,
    Plane got hijacked then 7/11,government snapped,all they talk about 24/7,
    Is war against terror and suicide bombers thinking of heaven,
    This is a sensitive issue,don't want to tread on no toes,
    America,don't wanna diss you,just wanna express with my flows,
    That you confused between your friends and your foes,
    You kept droppin' bombs on them foreign shores,
    But every time you attack someone,you close more doors.

    An outsider's view on da U.S of A,
    Don't expect Bush to do what i say,
    When he ignores his own voters and does it own his way,
    God knows his focus,where his purpose lay.(X2)

    Listen,we been facin' what you been facin' for a lot longer than you been patient,
    But U.S administration choosy with categ-o-rization,
    All the discrimination exposes lack of inclination.
    So Iraq goes down and Saddam's in interrogation,
    But I frown when i see Musharraf and Powell handshaking,
    To me that's just a lotta bullshit and faking,they talkin' about building bridges and making,
    A new tomorrow but they bring only sorrow,
    If you need an informed opinion you can take mine to borrow.
    Everybody knows Pakistan funds and supports terror,
    In Kashmir,our land,but we know it's no error,
    U.S knows,they just don't care as long as the bombs fall here and not there.
    Well what goes around comes around,
    You hear that sound?Quick,on all fours,get on the ground!
    Another suicide bomber,another fucked up town,
    I know the top's a lonely place but just 'coz you got the crown,
    Don't think you can piss off the whole world and still be down,
    As you hear this you grimace and frown,
    'Coz you think in my pace I show,
    Anger and bitterness towards American shores,
    It's not that though,i just want you to know,
    An outsider's view of the U.S of A,you feel me dough?


    An outsider's view on da U.S of A,
    Don't expect Bush to do what i say,
    When he ignores his own voters and does it own his way,
    God knows his focus,where his purpose lay.(X2)




    My open mic posts:
    Ballad of a ridah(http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124016)
    Divine justice(http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=123856)
    Love story of a thug(http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=123370)
    The 3rd one got slept on .....
    Last edited by a-list; April 11th, 2004 at 04:29 AM

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    this too,mad long but i got my attention,mufukas dont know how real it is out there,
    but i was feelin this, you need to shortin ya verses though, but keep doin you
    who feels it knows

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    eh..decent...might just be the topic why i didnt like it all much...had some good points and all but i wasnt feeling the structure and word choice...keep at it

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