No crew. hat or d/r's. I'll call them out as i see them.
10 lines blind spit due in 40 Minutes.
Good Luck
se7en
-KareLess-
No crew. hat or d/r's. I'll call them out as i see them.
10 lines blind spit due in 40 Minutes.
Good Luck
checkin' in and dropping my verse been keying it since we agreed to battle, so u know
it's kinda weak, but it's an ok verse ya have like 35 minutes dawg
(verse)
ayo,
The stakes, aren’t even that great, so this kid has to be fake
The day RB.com received him, was definitely a “Kareless” Mistakes
Talent isn’t wat you have, rap isn’t helping you wit anything
You can sweep, bitch, and be a herb, but rap isn’t one of those many things
I let this be told, keep shit on hold, till this herb grows tired and old
He couldn’t get his punches to stand out, if the text was made in BOLD
His name is a punch, Kareless, so original, but yet he’s not subliminal
He couldn’t be good at hitting bars, if he was a real life criminal
So wat do I do, I’ll choose to battle this herb, a win for me is the sum
If ya check his brain cells for iLL activity, they currently say he has none
nice rhyme seven(especially the kareless mistake one =dope) i wonder what karelss has go to say
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That Was aight Kid. But Not Enough. maybe Next Time
Se7en’s Profile
Birthday: December 31, 1988
Crew: Dynasty Soldiers
Unsure About Your SkiLL so he Claims he's New (as I hurt this Dude)..
Leader Of ya Crew. Yet Tries Out for Other's Hoping they'll DickRyde You..
And Like a Harpoon. Slice your Legs Like the "fuck you" in your Avey's Cartoon
Famous for Talking Shit. Qiuck! get him Pepto BisMol he’s bout’ to fart Soon!
Like Taco Bell I spit on your Existence. Plus, I’ll have you Served Qiuck..
Se7en claims to get Fine Bitches. Yet there steps seem to Cause Earth Quakes..
And For Superb Spits the word-is, Seven’s Verses really Couldn’t Hurt Shit!
‘Stuff’ your Bad Attempt Turk’ish. Don’t Fake Blue clown Looking character’s
Belong in a Circus? Plus you were Born in the year of Nine-Teen Eighty-Eight
So Bitch Wait! I wont hate, But Doesn’t that mean your still in the 9th Grade..
both had pretty good openers, but pretty weak closers. kareless your punches weren't on cool topics. i thought alot of 'em were jus elementary. i think 7 took u by his punches on your name. he had more to work wit tho too, but still.
vote-7
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Originally Posted by pictureperfect2
^^LoL..whatever..
Can We Please get some Veterens to vote damn it.
My verse was Filled with Personal's. and your saying
you liked his One Line. Learn how to rap. your wack Kid.
Peep his battles, he aint Shit compared to me or even
seven.
UpPiNg.
Yea. um kareless, you suck. Im sorry. I really am sorry to be the one to tell you, but i should hope that you can handle the truth. Really tho, you have potential, but you rap like my brother. I dont claim to be much better, although i know i could take you in a battle anyday, easily. My vote goes to 7 for having WAY better rhyme scheme and wordplay, even if there was very little. remember, less is more.
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Contrary to what you may think:
You are NOT a good rapper.
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Damn, what the hell happened to the edit button. Oh well, i forgot to mention, peep that battle in my sig, its all i ask. I only up once, and then i just vote. Its just a moral issue. Please vote on that too, thx
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Contrary to what you may think:
You are NOT a good rapper.
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^coo. Internet raps gay anyway.
thanks for your Opinion on this Vote. it's appreciated.
UpPiNg
are you just saying that. Im pretty sure you are pissed at me. I respect the fact that you can hold it in. I'd have went off if someone had said that to me. But then again, after that, i probably wouldnt be here, because they ban peeps all the time.
another tip for ya:
a lot of your rhymes are a little hard to understand, im sure peeps would realize the skill you got, if you kept the rhymes simple, or at least added in some little subscripts or something. How about exlpaining this:
Avey's Cartoon: ?
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Contrary to what you may think:
You are NOT a good rapper.
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uppin x2 if ya read this please vote.......VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE
Gonna say that 7 took this close battle...
I felt it flowed easier...
There were no forced rhymes...
(Kareless had one with "quick/quakes", that's more flow (if ya put em together) than two words at the end of different lines that are suppossed to rhyme with one another, they don't.)
Plus, Kare's shit was really stretched out...
7 at least was trying to keep em short.
And well, whackness fell on Kare with his "cartoon" line...
That was so bad, dude...
You forced, reached, and begged for that punch to connect.
And it didn't.
From 7, I liked the "Kareless" line, good name personal...
And the "criminal" one.
Aside from that, both you guys need to work on personals...
Playing off the name is cool, but you'll find alot of cats think that's nothing.
Use the profile and sig also...
Peace
Winner: 7
I hate it when I forget to leave a link...
Sorry for the freepost...
Peace
Vote right here, peeps!!!