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    wogzta & FormulaMC - Origins Of The Two

    [chorus]
    Where Did We Go To And Go Through? What Did We Encounter And Conquer?
    Mounted The Top-Of, This Divide And Split It For Two Lyrical Monsters
    Wogzta, Formula, Ready To Lead Into The Future With Out Of This World Teachings
    Seeing Is Believing, And You See It, So Believe It's A New Beginning...

    [verse 1 - FormulaMC]
    I Ride The Beat On The Tables, Thread The Needle
    Want To Disrupt The Rap Game, Like Yoko Did The Beatles
    But In An Instant, Shit Shifts And Change Is More Than Sporadic
    Like A Crack Addict On The Streets, You Can't Break The Habits
    You Can Make A Balance, But Other Shit Will Often Be
    Placed In Your Way N Soon To Me, It'll Be A Coffin I See
    Cough Then I Bleed, I Give It All On The Mic, No Other Choice
    But When I Talk, I'm Mimed, On The Corner With A Guitar But No Voice
    Poor, Case Open Hoping For Spare Dollars To Be Thrown In
    I Coulda Been Ill, But Past Drug Problems Has Dope Sewn In
    Lookin' At Pops, We Both Grown Men, It's Time For Me To Leave The Nest
    Time For Me Relieve All The Stress, I Believe This Is The Test
    Can I Pull Through ? And Finally See A Brighter Horizon ?
    Or Will My Mind Play Tricks On Me N Make The Sun Disguised N
    Dressed As The Moon, Not Surprising, Happier Days Have Vanished
    Frantic, I Pushed Panic But The Damn Cancer Had Me Satanic
    It Was Fuck Everyone, Live For Me, I Thought I'd Survive
    But Who Pulled The Plug On Rap's Respirator ? The Music's Not Alive
    And By Five, We Had The Four, The Score Hit Three, Down To Two. .
    Wogzta N Formula, Tall Standing, Demanding To Teach The Few

    [chorus]

    [interlude - wogzta]
    To understand the whole story...
    You must go back to the beginning...

    [verse 2 - wogzta]
    In the 7th Circle of Emcee Hell, an alliance was formed
    A crew lead by two demon kings where defiance was scorned
    Through volcanic rhymes and explosive preachin' they gathered minions
    And built an army with which they would shatter billions
    Of inferior creatures, who believed puppets could kill
    Until they stood before The Two, engulfed in an eruption of skill
    Their strings were cut and their show was over with no encore
    Enemies had no use left, put aside like the over-flown Concorde
    Death came so swiftly, the duo became known as the "Instants"
    Without moving a limb they could make you weaker than the bone of an infant
    But this was Hell, not Heaven and dissention came to the team
    They started to fall apart faster than the Nazi Regime
    Some of the minions wanted to appeal to the masses
    So they began actin' like Angels and shipped of skill in a basket
    Heaven opened its doors, and the traitors strayed off course
    But there were too many of them to be takin' back by force
    So the fools prospered, and began to believe they were dope
    The few that remained loyal to the roots were in need of some hope
    Creepin' up slow, we're ready to revive the dominance of our crew
    And explain the ancient origins of The Two...

    [chorus]

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    uppin...... lets get some honest feedback please......

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    aiight this was sum ill ass shyt rite here....both of u did ur thing and it came out really good, it had vocab, multis,personals,and nice wordplay, the only thing i would suggest is to change the title to sumthing more eye catchin so u can get more feedback...besdies dat nice drop on both of ur sides......

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    Upppppppp, leave links.

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    I read this earlier and I don't know why I didn't reply?...anywho...I was liking this you guys came very strong with multis(this was full of'em),wogzta i only read few pieces of yours and I'm impressed and Formula..I think you are coming up..moving on up~~~~my sig~~Click~Click~~~

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    wow mass props on this....it was almost fire stuf....damn nice imagery and just ill...i was feelin this a lot..stay up guys....

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    ^ aight thanks for all the nice feedback.... upping.....

    ps. penskills, i'll check your link

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    ^^Form,,, this was def the best line in the collab... tight...
    i thought you both came strong with this.... some nice wordplay and good syllable count,, got a nice flow going, both were pretty well matched for a collab, sometimes their too different to really go, but these went good.... nice work.... you make a good team... i'll be looking for the next.......
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    ^ thanks for the nice words about the collab..... upping

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    Pretty Good in my Opinion. Both had Flow.
    You Guys Had a Different Ryme Scheme Tho For the Same Song or Wuteva Tho. I like your Multies in Some Lines. And Formula's Meta's. Wogzta I thought Your Verse was Worded Pretty Good. Bringing Back History And shit. Blah.
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    ^ right... thanks for the honest feedback, its heaps appreciated... peace

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