±Clear Skies±

[Ackusation]

Look for Clear Skies in Distance with Teary Eyes Persistant;
kept Wishin for Death because when I Wrote none Listened
saw the Visions my Lyriks made Sense; Oppurtunity to Vent;
when Rules Bent I lost Looked above for guidance to be Sent
the Skies Fell collapsed under Life looked down at the Strife;
it Braught me the Life to continue the Ongoing struggle to Write
lost Sight of the Rights I had to continue on in the continues fight
fuck whats Mine I take it all Away all for Days to live for Pay;
Clouded thoughts and Sunless Rays wish but none will be Saved.

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[In$tig@TeR]

saw the Visions my Lyriks made Sense; Oppurtunity to Vent;
when Rules Bent I lost Looked above for guidance to be Sent
the Skies Fell collapsed under Life looked down at the Strife;
it Braught me the Life to continue the Ongoing struggle to Write

^^That shit thurr is straight up DOpe and Truth....Good Flow..Vocab.....Holla back....

[Ackusation]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...48#post1016448
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...58#post1016458

[Ackusation]

Levitate.

[Crooked-Comical]

Words = 7/10
Entetainment=5/10
punches=4/10

Overal = 5/10

elivate

[Ackusation]

There were know punches within the pieces you idiot.

[deuce deuce]

umm some good vocab in this peice and decent flow.......but you need to elivate a bit

[Ackusation]

Lmao, upping for someone with more then 1 liners.

[Lingwistik]

iight, i saw this one a little deep, it had ok vocab, the flow was pretty even all the way thru, id give the originality a 7/10, this was an ok piece, like sed b4, just need to elivate a little bit n ull be the shiznit, iight, peace