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CONTENDERS MATCH
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@dia
@Krucial Th1rt3en
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CONTENDERS MATCH
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Verses due 11:59 PM Friday EST
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FAILURE TO CHECK = DQ
@dia
@Krucial Th1rt3en
wtf is this?
Contenders match. Winner faces Bomb Bar in the fl champ match next week.Quote:
Originally Posted by Krucial Th1rt3en
Okay
@Dia @Krucial Th1rt3en @Codealt
verses due by tonight. show up!
winner will face Bomb Bard for the title next week!
want to just to 14 @Krucial Thirt3en
Quote:
Originally Posted by krucial thirteen
If you’re on a dizaster snapchat, you’re doing more than lurking around.
If I’m on a disaster snapchat, I want to see ur house burn to the ground.
Fucking with dia is like peer pressure at 13, you was dared to try it.
It’s krucial, you shouldn’t piss off a bully, if you think they’re terrifying.
Krucial never been proven, and versus a top dog, he’s just not ready yet.
That’s why weak fucks get smashed by bars, when against a heavy set.
This ain't a game, I catch you camping, they’ll find u dead out by the lake.
The reason you brainless, aint cuz you suppose to rip the head off of a snake.
Keep rambiling fucker, cuz every word you type, is getting you slaughtered.
When you in your own grave, if ur too deep, should stop digging it farther.
You’re out of your element, and champ matches aren’t fitting for rooks.
Stupid, u not tryna attack knowledge, but u should be hitting the books.
Congrats on getting contender, but you never ending ya business.
If you get a brilliant vote, it’s from that bitch that can’t finish a sentence.
Dia sent 14 @Krucial Th1rt3en
ok i got mine ready
you can drop mine is hidden.Quote:
Originally Posted by Krucial Th1rt3en
vs. DIA aka CODEALT
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u can mean mug all u want, i dare u to do something,
Broken Escalator, them Stares aint gon move nothing.
shotgun waitin for u to come thru, emotionless-blank faced,
soon as Code Enter i Release Bucks to him like a Bank Safe.
i embody evil, i need the most highs in heaven near me,
u face in smoke wit the devil, this aint a 9-11 theory.
i'll scope em' while he twisting a blunt, i put a hole in em',
that means, ill put a single dot on Die while he's rollin one.
i dont drink, so u know u wont see me in bars,
guns like Skater Shoes, the Kicks will have D seein Stars/DC n Stars.
before we shoot it out, we can box, i wan't to beat yo ass first,
give Code a number of combinations like im tryn guess a PassWord.
he's a mod, so he gotta fake record, do these wins exist or not?
he's 100 and 1? pfffft, Dalmations..im taking this bitches spot.
stock Chopper, you'll be eating Harder Rounds than a GobStopper,
Kru goin in....im breaking this Guy-Code like im a cock blocker.
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IF U DONT TOTALLY UNDERSTAND SOMETHING, JUST DM ME
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@Dia @Codealt
you got 16
Dia sent dia his verse lmao wtf is this shit
Quote:
Originally Posted by krucial thirteen
If you’re on a dizaster snapchat, you’re doing more than lurking around.
If I’m on a disaster snapchat, I want to see ur house burn to the ground.
Fucking with dia is like peer pressure at 13, you was dared to try it.
It’s krucial, you shouldn’t piss off a bully, if you think they’re terrifying.
Krucial never been proven, and versus a top dog, he’s just not ready yet.
That’s why weak fucks get smashed by bars, when against a heavy set.
This ain't a game, I catch you camping, they’ll find u dead out by the lake.
The reason you brainless, aint cuz you suppose to rip the head off of a snake.
Keep rambiling fucker, cuz every word you type, is getting you slaughtered.
When you in your own grave, if ur too deep, should stop digging it farther.
You’re out of your element, and champ matches aren’t fitting for rooks.
Stupid, u not tryna attack knowledge, but u should be hitting the books.
Congrats on getting contender, but you never ending ya business.
If you get a brilliant vote, it’s from that bitch that can’t finish a sentence.
When it comes to our levels, we aint even working the same system.
Kruc doesn’t even know whats going on, its like I’m battling a rape victim.
So write 2 more bars. It's already an easy dub
Lmao
V. Krucial
Dia verse was garb. He had one good bar, the attack knowledge hit the books personal. Krucial was more consistent with light bars to Beat Dias one good bar.
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Nm bout the easy dub. Forgot u suck lol
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And krucial is catching on quick. He just gotta quit the noob shit like the dc n stars, then explains it. We get it, stop doing that
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No Vote Was Deleted.
that vote definately shouldn't count @Kill Spree @KnowP
I'll break it down bar for bar later. U lost.
You guys are children
them stares aint gon move nothing
Krucial
u can mean mug all u want, i dare u to do something,
Broken Escalator, them Stares aint gon move nothing.
Dope wordplay in this finisher nice flip creative
shotgun waitin for u to come thru, emotionless-blank faced,
soon as Code Enter i Release Bucks to him like a Bank Safe.
Wasnt really digging the wording on the finisher here soon as i code enter i get it but didnt sound correct
i embody evil, i need the most highs in heaven near me,
u face in smoke wit the devil, this aint a 9-11 theory.
Ok not a bad flip here
i'll scope em' while he twisting a blunt, i put a hole in em',
that means, ill put a single dot on Die while he's rollin one.
Die np a miss for me its a reach here
i dont drink, so u know u wont see me in bars,
guns like Skater Shoes, the Kicks will have D seein Stars/DC n Stars.
Good wordplay here
Dia
If you’re on a dizaster snapchat, you’re doing more than lurking around.
If I’m on a disaster snapchat, I want to see ur house burn to the ground.
Not sure what the finisher was suppose to mean unless ur correlating it to disaster the battle rapper in reference to something current @Dia explain this
Fucking with dia is like peer pressure at 13, you was dared to try it.
It’s krucial, you shouldn’t piss off a bully, if you think they’re terrifying.
Basic hit no impact
Krucial never been proven, and versus a top dog, he’s just not ready yet.
That’s why weak fucks get smashed by bars, when against a heavy set.
Again
This ain't a game, I catch you camping, they’ll find u dead out by the lake.
The reason you brainless, aint cuz you suppose to rip the head off of a snake.
Ok like this flip here creative
Keep rambiling fucker, cuz every word you type, is getting you slaughtered.
When you in your own grave, if ur too deep, should stop digging it farther.
No played and basic
You’re out of your element, and champ matches aren’t fitting for rooks.
Stupid, u not tryna attack knowledge, but u should be hitting the books.
Played
Congrats on getting contender, but you never ending ya business.
If you get a brilliant vote, it’s from that bitch that can’t finish a sentence.
Lol
When it comes to our levels, we aint even working the same system.
Kruc doesn’t even know whats going on, its like I’m battling a rape victim.
No
Damn dia rushed everything was a basic hit or either played. He had 2 quotables. Krucial suprised me getting better with creativity and good wordplay usage got a little too fancy in areas were wording affected him. Other then that he was underestimated and he was more consistent then dia with attempts and like i said main factor creativity
V/Krucial
Oops missed some shit cuz krucial spaced his lines out
before we shoot it out, we can box, i wan't to beat yo ass first,
give Code a number of combinations like im tryn guess a PassWord.
Played predictable np
he's a mod, so he gotta fake record, do these wins exist or not?
he's 100 and 1? pfffft, Dalmations..im taking this bitches spot.
False personal but the flip was dope
stock Chopper, you'll be eating Harder Rounds than a GobStopper,
Kru goin in....im breaking this Guy-Code like im a cock blocker.
Ok.cool.nameplay
Quote:
Originally Posted by Krucial Th1rt3en
Fire battle, here. Both came with some ridiculous material that I happened to enjoy thoroughly but at the end of the day there was a clear winner here that went above and beyond his limitations as a textcee and evolved into a force to be reckoned with.Quote:
Originally Posted by Dia
v-Dia
this site is fuckin wierd, i got a notification that bdot commented on this and i cant see it. wtf wrong wit this site smh
Quote:
Originally Posted by Krucial Th1rt3en
Fire battle, here. Both came with some ridiculous material that I happened to enjoy thoroughly but at the end of the day there was a clear winner here that went above and beyond his limitations as a textcee and evolved into a force to be reckoned with.Quote:
Originally Posted by Dia
v-Dia
Kru-she-all
u can mean mug all u want, i dare u to do something,
Broken Escalator, them Stares aint gon move nothing.
Nah, u getting better though. U need to beef up the punch a bit. Glad u ditched the longbar crap.
shotgun waitin for u to come thru, emotionless-blank faced,
soon as Code Enter i Release Bucks to him like a Bank Safe.
cool, this suits you. I'd like to see you be harsher via wording. But this is agood start to a change in ur progress! You could've did with out the simile ending and went for...
if Code enter? I'll toss so many Bucks u'd swear we're in a bank safe. <-- Like this @Krucial Th1rt3en
i embody evil, i need the most highs in heaven near me,
u face in smoke wit the devil, this aint a 9-11 theory.
Eh, you lacking certain words to make this pop. It seems like you have concepts but not the wording to follow through with the shot.
i'll scope em' while he twisting a blunt, i put a hole in em',
that means, ill put a single dot on Die while he's rollin one.
Cool thought this was creative
i dont drink, so u know u wont see me in bars,
guns like Skater Shoes, the Kicks will have D seein Stars/DC n Stars.
Choppy, but i can appreciate the creativity
before we shoot it out, we can box, i wan't to beat yo ass first,
give Code a number of combinations like im tryn guess a PassWord.
ha, cool try to use less similies. If u see my battles i use alot of metaphors. They hit harder than similies.
he's a mod, so he gotta fake record, do these wins exist or not?
he's 100 and 1? pfffft, Dalmations..im taking this bitches spot.
this was light
stock Chopper, you'll be eating Harder Rounds than a GobStopper,
Kru goin in....im breaking this Guy-Code like im a cock blocker.
lol no homo
You're not saying anything thats too complexed for my foreign brain to handle.
DIA:
If you’re on a dizaster snapchat, you’re doing more than lurking around.
If I’m on a disaster snapchat, I want to see ur house burn to the ground.
Cool
Fucking with dia is like peer pressure at 13, you was dared to try it.
It’s krucial, you shouldn’t piss off a bully, if you think they’re terrifying.
See u got concepts ur just aren't harsh alot of the times. Its like if that was me with that concept though kind of moment. This was a jab at best.
Krucial never been proven, and versus a top dog, he’s just not ready yet.
That’s why weak fucks get smashed by bars, when against a heavy set.
This is light again. A bit generic i mean yea he didn't battle the vets here really. But he hasn't had an oppertunity.
This ain't a game, I catch you camping, they’ll find u dead out by the lake.
The reason you brainless, aint cuz you suppose to rip the head off of a snake.
No
Keep rambiling fucker, cuz every word you type, is getting you slaughtered.
When you in your own grave, if ur too deep, should stop digging it farther.
I had a similar concept, this is ok.
You’re out of your element, and champ matches aren’t fitting for rooks.
Stupid, u not tryna attack knowledge, but u should be hitting the books.
I remeber him saying that, this is a personal statement flip. Alright
Congrats on getting contender, but you never ending ya business.
If you get a brilliant vote, it’s from that bitch that can’t finish a sentence.
lol dope
When it comes to our levels, we aint even working the same system.
Kruc doesn’t even know whats going on, its like I’m battling a rape victim.
ehhh
I just feel like dia had the more impactful disses. its like boxing one is throwing more but missing & will land a jab here an there. But then the other fighter is land the clear hard thudding shots. A jab vs a solid right/left power shot. Both had alot of misses. But when it came to lands i just felt krucial although HAS IMPROVE VASTLY...he just is lacking the Oomph factor. Pm if u need help krucial, i'd help ya any time.
v/ DIa although krucial did impress here no shame i lost my first contenders match too
u can mean mug all u want, i dare u to do something,
Broken Escalator, them Stares aint gon move nothing.
light punch. pretty played n old concept too.
shotgun waitin for u to come thru, emotionless-blank faced,
soon as Code Enter i Release Bucks to him like a Bank Safe.
pretty good flip. wording could of flowed better but aight land
i embody evil, i need the most highs in heaven near me,
u face in smoke wit the devil, this aint a 9-11 theory.
naw not feeling this hit at all
i'll scope em' while he twisting a blunt, i put a hole in em',
that means, ill put a single dot on Die while he's rollin one.
coo concept but its a reach. its DiA, not DiE
i dont drink, so u know u wont see me in bars,
guns like Skater Shoes, the Kicks will have D seein Stars/DC n Stars.
lol good gun bar n name play
before we shoot it out, we can box, i wan't to beat yo ass first,
give Code a number of combinations like im tryn guess a PassWord.
FIRE!!!
he's a mod, so he gotta fake record, do these wins exist or not?
he's 100 and 1? pfffft, Dalmations..im taking this bitches spot.
not bad. little lazy on the execution but not bad.
stock Chopper, you'll be eating Harder Rounds than a GobStopper,
Kru goin in....im breaking this Guy-Code like im a cock blocker.
lmao dope!!
vs
If you’re on a dizaster snapchat, you’re doing more than lurking around.
If I’m on a disaster snapchat, I want to see ur house burn to the ground.
uhhh naw not feelin this one at all.
Fucking with dia is like peer pressure at 13, you was dared to try it.
It’s krucial, you shouldn’t piss off a bully, if you think they’re terrifying.
suppppperrr light jab
Krucial never been proven, and versus a top dog, he’s just not ready yet.
That’s why weak fucks get smashed by bars, when against a heavy set.
aight. nothin really witty here just aight
This ain't a game, I catch you camping, they’ll find u dead out by the lake.
The reason you brainless, aint cuz you suppose to rip the head off of a snake.
nawww this was not a good bar here
Keep rambiling fucker, cuz every word you type, is getting you slaughtered.
When you in your own grave, if ur too deep, should stop digging it farther.
extra week son.
You’re out of your element, and champ matches aren’t fitting for rooks.
Stupid, u not tryna attack knowledge, but u should be hitting the books.
again really light. could of been fire with wp or something kinda blah
Congrats on getting contender, but you never ending ya business.
If you get a brilliant vote, it’s from that bitch that can’t finish a sentence.
set up was weak but punchline was pretty good.
When it comes to our levels, we aint even working the same system.
Kruc doesn’t even know whats going on, its like I’m battling a rape victim.
again, woulda been coo wit a set up that connected. not feeling this one.
Not really hard for a contenders match. hope yall bring the fire in the champ match. this was pretty light all the way around. got Dia wit a couple light jabs here n there against krucial who dropped a couple solid hitters. could go either way tho. close one to call.
v. krucial
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this will end at first to 5 votes or close by evening. @Ronin @Kill Spree @ILLunatic @Amen @plethora
vsQuote:
Originally Posted by Crucial with a K
Terrible contenders match, IMO...Quote:
Originally Posted by Dia
v/Crucial with the edge. Had Dia worded some of his concepts in a more harsher manner - I feel he could have easily taken this.
LmaoQuote:
Originally Posted by B Dot LESNAR
Fuckin dead
krucial wins. Moves on to face the champ!!