!!! Hot Fire !!! Street Ass Dirty South Banger and That Jazztastic Melody

Not to Worry
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=5110798&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=5110798&q=hi

Smooth Scene
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=5110791&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=5110791&q=hi

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...28#post5577228


peep this for me...


Smooth Scene is dopeness... the other was ok...

not to worry
i got that same bass patch, well i think i made it from a sample actually i forget where i got it from..that synth noise thatcomes is is kinda strong, shits got a nice nice slower flow to this man, zeeeeeen!

SECOND ONE

this one starts off rude. drums are real clean u make pretty good use of the kit too...sounds are real crisp on this man, nice soft shaker... this ones sloer too, sounds like it would sound rude a bit faster, love the guitar that comes in too man..

much love on the responce home boi, stay up and kleep it fresh..

no doubt meng...thanks...

the bass in the first is a standard reason patch...wit a little tweakin...

yo nigga! i locked my fucking keys in the car last night. nate an adrian had to drive up there with my spare then realize they brought the wrong spare and the real spare was in my room! got home at 3 AM.

this shits sick. harps sampled? nice little mix of instruments in hurr i dig.

2nd. that guitars real cool, piano sample is dope, that vocal sample is crazy. rappers beat, dipset holla. dont like the new guitars that came in sound real out of place.

just the one gripe on both

i couldnt come out anyway...you konw the deal...lockdown!!

no samples in the first...

piano aint sampled...the only thing thats sampled are the vocals...and the little guitar clip that comes in every bar

holler at me this wkend...st pattys day bangers goin down all around

appreciate...up

opposite of down

not to worry is ok but nothing stood out to me,

the other one with the sample isn't my style and soudn weak to me

Not To Worry - Ain't really digging this much homey.. but it got potiental though.
Smooth Scene - Like that shaker. Sound a little bit empty on this joint. You need to hit 'em with a catchy melody and sound dun. Cause people tend to turn shit off when nothing appealing in 10 seconds. Keep at though mane.

I liked smooth scene way more than the other one...felt like you spent more time on smooth scene...the other one is missing something just cant put a finger on it..

Not to Worry - 6.5/10

Smooth Scene - 8.5/10

keep it up.

its alright bro try to work with a beter meldoy

ayo this beat was coo but the melody was kinda off track nahmean but i liked the beat overall..stay up