Wk 14 Slayerr 6-4 vs Knoxville 4-7 - Slayerr Wins

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@Slayerr @KnoXville.

@Phalanx Im 4-7 not 3-8.

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Nobody will ever rock out to his trash rhymes, You & ya boys fell out deep after the cracked signs,
The way slayer gets his brain picked wit drumsticks you’d think the rock band coming outta retirement for a last time.

Ur a virgin, predator with ED, u can’t get a girl to stay round
U ain’t from the school of hard knox just coz your last boner was in a playground

school of hard knox??? boner was in a playground??? lost me slay... it started good then fell short

knox' pun needed work but i get it

v-knox

knox im sorry buddy but wasnt feeling it this week. super long winded and took away any enjoyment for me. gotta have tags and toppers if you're doing something resembling long bar

Slayerr. pretty good angle on his name but not super cleanly worded. however i did enjoy it more so you will get my vote

v/ slayerr.

Vote Slayerr


for the cleaner execution. Both had decent set ups and punches, but was digging how Slayerr's narrative seemed to be more focused/structured, which allowed to read off better.

V Knox..ok wordplay could’ve been done better but enough to win here

Lmao slayers made me laugh... Nice to see some comedy in this league ... But of a reach with how it was executed but still chuckle worthy and decent enough

Knox - picking his brain with drumsticks is a bit of a reach if this was supposed to be an attack line for me .... Multi usage was good but the punch was just way too longwinded for my taste this week

I got Slayerr

i got slayer here, better format and overall solid. knox was a bit long winded and choppy, the concept was ok just not too concise.

v. slayslaydaprince

Vote - Slayer.

Competitive match. I think both were even conceptually, but execution-wise Knox got a little wordy, and that allowed Slayer to edge it. Close though.

Knox was reaaaaallyyy long for my taste.. the concept is fine but the execution doesnt make it for me.. you could have used a shorter setup to compensate. matter of style i guess

slayer concept was decent not super fan of hard knox but i think im heading with him for a cleaner execution

v slayer

Slayerr Wins 6-1