SSR Week One: Slecht vs Echelon (Echelon Wins via NS)

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Welcome BACK to Sacred Scriptures! This week, we truly have something special! We're opening the season with fireworks as we dive into the shark infested waters with a Challenge week! It's simple really. Everybody has ONE topic, or theme I should say. Not only do you have the chance to win your battle, BUT the BEST piece of this week will earn a small cash prize! So, make sure to write your bloody heart out! This week's theme is ... TIME. Do whatever you want with that, just make sure you stay on topic or it'll hurt you in the votes and grand prize! Good luck to everybody!

Verses Due: 11:59PM Pacific Time, January 7th, 2022.
Votes Due: 11:59PM Pacific Time, January 9th, 2022.
3-0 is a KO, otherwise it's the first to 5.
No biting, recycling, or swaying (if a battle's open, do NOT discuss it)
50 lines max

@slecht
vs
@Echelon

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I'm a beast from the east..the continutallity of trails and tribulations...
I'm nothing and something..I'm nothing and something..
I'm the succulent succotash of nothing and something..
I'm everything and nothing..I'm nothing and something..
I'm succulent suffering..the endorphin of nothing..
I"M INDIGO STREAMS AND INDIGO LAKES..THE INDIGO RANCH..
I'm indigo shores and indigo ranch..indigo sticks..
I'm indigo ranch dip..indigo ranch clip..indigo ranch sip..
I'm nothing and something..the succulent suffering..the succulent suffering..
the succulent suffering..the succulent suffering..the succulent suffering..
THE SUCCULENT SUFFERING..THE SUCCULENT SUFFERING..I'm nothing and something..
BEASTIALTY RULES! I'm nothing and something! THE SUCCULENT SUFFERING..

@Echelon There wasn't much to like here. Off topic. Repetutive wording. No narrative direction. Mechanics are sporadic at best. Flow was not good. Really just a troll level drop. Thanks for sharing. Take your meds.

This was surprisingly good considering what I’ve seen from you in the LLL. I really liked the indigo concept towards the end because I think indigo is a word i rarely use but you’ve made me say it so many times it starts to sound weird.