Wk 15 Blue Bayou 7-5 Vs King 1-0 - King wins

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@Blue Bayou @King

Haha what up mang

YOURE FUCKING DEADDDDD

BOYYYY YOU'RE BOUT TO GET A HOOK TO THE TEETH
YOU'LL THINK I AMBIEN COOL THEN BAMMMM...1-HIT PUTS YOU TO SLEEP

Almost forgot my bad


Got ur girl gagged n cuffed, she's mine for play
Make the bitch clear her schedule then have her tied up the entire day

Blue- Am being cool is solid wp, no argument there. Not sure I've ever seen ambien referred to as a hit though and that's where the problem comes in. Pretty cool concept, good wording but a slight reach here. That being said, it's good and a solid bar, I can't hate on much here.

King- This is simple but cool. clear her schedule/tied up the entire day is solid, I've seen similar things but maybe not this exact connection. The wording is good as it normally is for you. That being said, the overall punch just doesn't hit as hard to me and it felt kinda lazy overall. It's like you took a solid concept but just didn't use it to really hurt him.

It may come as a surprise from the breakdown but I'm going Blue simply because I enjoyed it more. Both were solid but blue's just hit harder to me even though both bars may come off as slightly lazy.

V/ Blue.

Haha damn both of these bars are good on first read. Hard choice. I think I’m leaning Blue just because I haven’t actually seen the am-bein wordplay used before whereas I have seen variations of King’s bar, albeit I think king put a nice spin on it and the flow/set up was nice. V/Blue

Vote King

Set up better, and Ive seen the ambien wp before, and the set up left alot to be desired. Both were decent, but King was more complete and thus more impactful.

Ambian been done to death and Blues was as predictable as it gets. He trolling
Kings was cool had the humor factor. Could have been worded a bit smoother but I got king taking this

V.King/both were good. Clear her schedule,Tied up was nice

Thought both were nice but king was more harsh overall

v/ king

I've seen BB's Ambien wordplay variant before, and the way it was used was pretty much straightforward, so in this instance I would have to argue that there really wasn't anything overly different from what I've already seen. It was a solid bar nonetheless. King's bar was actually kind of funny to me. It was a great insult and he executed it rather nicely.

vote king

Good battle from you both, ambien word play was alright and tied the punch nicely. Kings concept I haven’t seen before and thought it was executed cleanly. Close battle I just think kings had more going on
V/king

King wins