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Recorded this song a while ago. Tell me what you think.
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delivery is not bad but you can put some more emotion into it. the lyrics are pretty good, flow is not bad pretty simple but smooth and flows. digging the beat on that soulful shit. hook is ight nothin too serious. i felt like the audio was little low maybe raise it up a bit. overall a good drop just work on your delivery a bit more and you should be good.

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such a quick reply. thanks man. i will work on that delivery and emotion. i appreciate it the critique.