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@Ryno
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Yeah
Claiming ur the best, can’t throw a hook ur chances r shoddy at best
So If I’m boxing ryno he’s laid out in a casket when I put his body to rest
Ur life’s a mess, can’t keep a girl or afford to wow the best
Failing when u must elong your finical prospects is why that bird is now your ex
My nigga…
Scrawny faggots like u can’t shoot their shot, ur hells here
The way u struggle to lift the hammer, u make 22’s feel like they’re mjolnir
Plus ya mothers a junky, sorry to spoil it, kid
Every key decision that whores ever made involved sniffing one off of a toilet lid
This is tough both entertaining
Slayer boxing line creative
Ryno toilet line funny
Vote-Ryno
This battle was ILL forreal. I liked both participants who delivered some clever blows to each other. The Thor bar that Ryno used was done nicely and the 2nd bar really hit good with sniffing coke of the toilet seat. For Slayerrs verse, I did like the boxing laid out in casket verse a little. However, I believe that the 2nd bar was a bit stronger.
Vote - Ryno
slayrr
Claiming ur the best, can’t throw a hook ur chances r shoddy at best
So If I’m boxing ryno he’s laid out in a casket when I put his body to rest
not a new concept but worded smoothly
Ur life’s a mess, can’t keep a girl or afford to wow the best
Failing when u must elong your finical prospects is why that bird is now your ex
nice flow into the second punch an. would have been nice to keep the same syllable rhyme pattern but you rhymed best again for the second bar.its a bit redundant but not a huge kill for enjoyment. the overall but was ok. except for the word elong lol . sounded kind of weird.
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Ryno
Scrawny faggots like u can’t shoot their shot, ur hells here
The way u struggle to lift the hammer, u make 22’s feel like they’re mjolnir
this was ok. but a 22 is a bit cartoonish lol
Plus ya mothers a junky, sorry to spoil it, kid
Every key decision that whores ever made involved sniffing one off of a toilet lid
i liked this right here
this was very close overall but i have to go with ryno. the toilet line was pretty fire
v/Ryno
4me it came down 2 a bar each
slayers 1st bar
& rynos last bar
i think rynos bar hit harder
slayer was worded good
ryno just packd more of a hit
winner ryno
Vote - Ryno
I liked Slayerr s first bar. Second felt horribly worded unless I'm missing something. Ryno connected with both bars and thus takes this off consistency.
Ryno wins KO