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My Passion
writing helps me with alot of problems, helps me sort things, helps me clear my mind...
With every letter comes a drop of blood
With every word comes my first love
With every thought comes my heart
Every sentence brings out pain
Every period brings a tear
Everything I show here is all that I fear
Things people couldn’t understand
Things people wouldn’t understand
Cause I am a selfness being
Never thinking just seeing
I’m ripping out my inner lining
Reveling what I am and I can be
I must stand strong and face reality
Stand strong and raise my voice
Scream from heaven to hell all that there is
And when im done I will stand alone
And leave behind this drop of blood
And my first love
And I lay down my heart
Fight off my pain
Cry a single tear
And laugh at fear
Then maybe you will understand
give me some feedback
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This is deep. Good drop. this is one way many people use to get out stuff and help solve there problems. good structure, word flow was good. keep elavating. hit up someof mine if you pleez. spect JT