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@mal diction
@mv
This has to be a dishonorable lead
So i’ll run you over 5 times to get you up to speed
M.V. versus M.D.. pst! brother pleace
He’s a minor weed, and I've gotten harder with E.D.
M’s full of gay pride. I’ll never have it!
See him come out the closet. shaped like a casket!
I’m cold as winter, hot as summer be
Find his girl downing me.. now that’s a Hummer V!
On him, No sense in wasting punches
I’d rather fill him with shots, to show him where his lunch is
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this is the battle you dropped after that comment. please stop my time for laughter.Quote:
Originally Posted by mal diction
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ya lines small and concise, im not hating-im awe of ur advice
ill take your formula into consideration by abbreviating all of life
im ur gatekeeper, best me ur a cheatah and thats a wild tone
imagine that? it'd be Spider-Man high on loud blown cuz u'd be beat by a milestoned
u show up and lose, it just sends us! mal is a menace cuz he is pretentious
i got ur eulogy written, i just need a body so im expecting you to keep perfect attendance
if we are comparing things im shining, your shimmering. im dropping gems, your littering
find me going toe to toe with the best, this pussy would be just scissoring
this gonna be beyond a loss, looking up from the canvas is how i saw this trash fell
but paint them a picture of our encounters from ur perspective, i recommend using ur Past Ls
I am probably baby brain but most of these bars either went over or under my head.Quote:
Originally Posted by mal diction
"if we are comparing things im shining, your shimmering. im dropping gems, your littering" is the hottest bar of this battle.Quote:
Originally Posted by MV
MV has my vote.
Mal diction has a verse composed of great flow, but the formation of the punches were basic concepts for the most part. MV had stronger wordplay, technical, and harder punches. Both battles were consistent, but
Vote - MV
MV had more wordplay, better wordplay and with better setups. The past-L’s line was my favourite.
I did like the conciseness of Mal’s lines, the wordplays had potential but could do with better setups make them pop.
Mal, not sure whether you want some constructive crit, but just in case you do here’s an example: the hummer V line could’ve been good but there was nothing in the setup to relate it to the vehicle. Even something a simple as saying his girl was downing you -in your car- would’ve turned it from a random mention of a hum vee to an actual double entendre.
Vote: MV.
Mv got this. Stronger more creative verse, Mal u gotta work on being more hard hitting and learn to attack harsher.. this verse of urs was a little to basic, nothing really stood out.. no hate just think outside the box more… it is ironic u said that about mv them dropped a basic verse lol.. again no hate just work on getting harsher vote MV
winner mv
he had the better lines
mal was really basic
mv had the better concepts and ideas
pretty easy 2vote on
MV wins 5-0