where the sun never shines

thanks dagel, lol.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...472/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...227/index.html

Short but sweet. Felt like you could've put a little more in it. Some lines were too short (though every line could've had more to it) I see what you were trying to do. And it was a cool idea. Worked for the most part. But if you're looking for the thumbs up of ALL readers. You'll have to write a little more lol. Cool concept. Cool read. Only have one complaint, and that's the length of the lines being too short. But other than then, cool stuff bro.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...895/index.html

.....wtf?

thanks dagel, lol.