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@Inmate @whorticulture
Thanks for setting it up Joe. Gl culture
Check...
I'm subtly sowing seeds, hors ruminating doubts that imbue
His only rise to fame he Botany, let that wither away and die too
You got deep-seated problems, the roots run further more
No one on this ungodly fucking Earth, will help you dig to the core
Cults blind as a bat but damn the dumb fuck reads Brail so good
'Well'..the two by four between his eyes, gave new meaning to Redwood
Wrecking you is inevitable, ill work circles around you for days, then
If we ever square off again..it'll be after I take this win
Your leaves are wilted bitch, seriously increase your vocabulary
Cause like my weed...I don't fuck with immature plants any day
deep seated problems and the only way to solve them is to rape an inmate
its been so long since i had fresh meat what a treat wear this mop i want u to imitate
pretend to b something your not pretend to b hot really your not really you flop
you as fake as a prop pleas stop ill beat u so bad your momma will call the cops
vocab im beggin you to concede even if you disagree
with astronomy its written in the stars im the anomaly
to bring an end to your reign with tremendous pain and and calamity
perpetual bars inevitably i devour this this coward cook him like grilled cheese
you chose to speak with belligerence write a rap with minimal intelligence
so i obliterated it kamikaze cuz i am the bomb Hiroshima there hasnt been another since
nahQuote:
Originally Posted by whorticulture
Doesnt rhymeQuote:
Originally Posted by Inmate
vote/ Inmate better wording & punchlines.
vote 1-0 inmate
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thanks for your opinion clout
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bump it was me that voted for myself just to see the poll so that one vote does not count
How bout this? Since you voted for yourself which you're not suppose to do period...is I'll vote for myself and we'll call it even.
yessir sounds official
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sorry about that i was just curious to see if anyone voted
Clout....you forgot to poll this....should be 2-1 now
whorticulture
deep seated problems and the only way to solve them is to rape an inmate
its been so long since i had fresh meat what a treat wear this mop i want u to imitate
Shame you had a good concept here, shame the set up was harder than the punch.
pretend to b something your not pretend to b hot really your not really you flop
you as fake as a prop pleas stop ill beat u so bad your momma will call the cops
Meh doesn't connect
vocab im beggin you to concede even if you disagree
with astronomy its written in the stars im the anomaly
Doesn't land. just some self hype.
to bring an end to your reign with tremendous pain and and calamity
perpetual bars inevitably i devour this this coward cook him like grilled cheese
Maybe its just my accent, but this doesn't even rhyme. Is there a reason you used the words, and & this twice?
you chose to speak with belligerence write a rap with minimal intelligence
so i obliterated it kamikaze cuz i am the bomb Hiroshima there hasnt been another since
stretched.
Inmate
I'm subtly sowing seeds, hors ruminating doubts that imbue
His only rise to fame he Botany, let that wither away and die too
Weak punch good concept.
You got deep-seated problems, the roots run further more
No one on this ungodly fucking Earth, will help you dig to the core
Again weak punch but decent concept, Botnay theme running true.
Cults blind as a bat but damn the dumb fuck reads Brail so good
'Well'..the two by four between his eyes, gave new meaning to Redwood
Meh
Wrecking you is inevitable, ill work circles around you for days, then
If we ever square off again..it'll be after I take this win
This doesn't rhyme, or is very forced.
Your leaves are wilted bitch, seriously increase your vocabulary
Cause like my weed...I don't fuck with immature plants any day
Still with the botany theme, nice work. punch missed.
MVGT - Inmate
Reason - Stronger of the two verse's, nice work at least keeping a theme for a couple of wordplay attempts.
whorticulture try and work some punctuation into you bars, was finding them running too long.
Yeah he did so I did just to make it even. Won't happen again
Uppin this shit
Up....vote dammit
Inmate wins.
Vote does not count please Explain why you think Battler A beat Battler B better pleaseQuote:
Originally Posted by B Dot LESNAR
Thanks
2-0 more votes
deep seated problems and the only way to solve them is to rape an inmate
its been so long since i had fresh meat what a treat wear this mop i want u to imitate
meh, could have been good
pretend to b something your not pretend to b hot really your not really you flop
you as fake as a prop pleas stop ill beat u so bad your momma will call the cops
decent wordplay
vocab im beggin you to concede even if you disagree
with astronomy its written in the stars im the anomaly
miss
to bring an end to your reign with tremendous pain and and calamity
perpetual bars inevitably i devour this this coward cook him like grilled cheese
negative
you chose to speak with belligerence write a rap with minimal intelligence
so i obliterated it kamikaze cuz i am the bomb Hiroshima there hasnt been another since
meh
I'm subtly sowing seeds, hors ruminating doubts that imbue
His only rise to fame he Botany, let that wither away and die too
decent
You got deep-seated problems, the roots run further more
No one on this ungodly fucking Earth, will help you dig to the core
decent
Cults blind as a bat but damn the dumb fuck reads Brail so good
'Well'..the two by four between his eyes, gave new meaning to Redwood
okay
Wrecking you is inevitable, ill work circles around you for days, then
If we ever square off again..it'll be after I take this win
no
Your leaves are wilted bitch, seriously increase your vocabulary
Cause like my weed...I don't fuck with immature plants any day
doesn't flow but could have been good.
overall pretty weak battle but vote :inmate
Inmate Wins @Dia can u edit the poll on this to add win wont let me
Done but @Dia still give him the accessQuote:
Originally Posted by Joe Boston