lol that's brilliant
lol @ aids pens
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lol that's brilliant
lol @ aids pens
Lol that sig reminds me of the bright neon one that had ydk pop in and out at ya back in the day
That shit bout gave me seizures lol
Don't be mad I can make you cry with pretty words
@Zen the Dude @Wayfarer
I haven't had time to feed your pieces yet, but thanks for dropping.
I'll be feeding them at once stage today hopefully.
No worries, take your time. =]
I'm still making my rounds when it comes to feedback as well.
i'll feed eventually... anyways how long has everyone here been writing?
since forever
Ditto^^^
Fourth grade I won some stupid 2 line poem contest an kept writing ever since
I was fairly naturally gifted in primary school and did solid with imagery and loved writing stories and stuff, but left it all behind in high school. In high school I had a topic once where we were to write about "A great achievement". I can't remember how I flipped it but basically it was an entire piece about the opium trip of a vietnam soldier. Teacher accused me of being high when I wrote it.
I also had a poetry class in first year in school which taught us all the alliteration an assonance and everything but I never cared about it and just annoyed the teacher all the time.
I started writing rap verses when I was 13, which is really young thinking back. Was on a fake bebo page. In 2007 I did a few topicals on a few weird sites, and then in 2008 I was over on HHA writing proper topicals with YD. Over the years, I started to include a lot of those poetic techniques we learned in school and instead of focusing on lyricism and ridiculously complex metaphors, I switched to storytelling. Love telling a story of a new location through imagery.
Since one day before emily started.
Thank you @Emily for the wonderful feedback; it is greatly appreciated and I am glad you enjoyed it. Will definitely be returning the favor. Haven't been sleeping on your writing as I've read at least two of your poems, I just haven't responded yet because I don't like giving half-assed feedback.
I like making Erebus cry with my life stories
Then I make them rhyme and he likes them
^Das da troof
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